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Two Become One (Shards Pt. III)
« on: August 12, 2010, 10:39:27 PM »
Another Day past, another Dream to see Kara. I felt my mind slip into a floating sea of shadows. A light shone forth.
"Leo, Its me."
"Kara, How've you been?"
"Im great, but I have an urgent subject to bring up. Take a look at the Shard you gave me. Is there any difference?"
"Yeah, I was clear before. Now its...Sapphire Blue. The exact Shade of blue as Layla's Eyes..."
"Exactly, Now look at your Shard, Leo."
"Emerald Green, Just like yours..."
We both looked into the others Eyes, as Kara, then I Smiled.
"I noticed something else too, Kara. They both have that same curve...and they look Precision-Carved."
"Our Spirits shaped them."
"Wait. If we align them so the curves touch, then it looks as though something is meant to fit inside."
Kara reached into her pocket, and pulled out a Silvery marble, shining in many colors.
"This is a Mana Orb, They are common in the spirit world, but extremely rare in the Human World. If one is there, it means an angel or roaming spirit dropped it. Its Aura is literally completely full of magic. If all 3 items were fused to the ring, and Layla put it on, I would live on in her. My thoughts and hers would be apparent to the other, and our voices would blend. Our hair would be wavy, as hers is straight, mine Curly. The eyes, Leo, would be Sapphire blue on top, Emerald Green on the bottom, and there would be a Blend toward The center."
"Ok, I'll do it"
"Its almost time to leave, Everything will stay with you, as I gave it to you. She must be willing, if she isn't, The magic will fail, and I'll be sent back. Wake up now."

It was morning, of course.
"Layla, I had a dream last night, and Kara was physically in it."
"Really, How did it go?"
So I explained to her, about Kara's Wish.
"I dont know, what if I don't like it? Im starting to think you are only going through with this to see Kara."
"No, not just that. I wont have to be alone anymore, wondering about her. She'll be with you, This way, I'll have much more time to be with you, Layla, because I love you. I could have picked anyone, but I chose you. You reminded me so much of Kara, and that couldn't have made you a better person. If you dont like it, you can slip off the ring, and She'll leave."
"Okay, as long as you are Happy, That's all that matters."

So, I went to the jewelers, and the same man who fused one shard to my ring was still there.
I asked, "Hey Renny, can you add more to my ring?"
"Sure, what did you have in mind?"
"I wanted these on it too. The Shards like this, with the ball in the center."
I handed him the other Shard and the Orb.
"Here, Take Care."
"You too, Renny."
I paid for the fusing, then walked home.

"Layla, Here it is."
She Slipped the Ring on her finger, Then recited an incantation.
"I bear this ring as a token of acceptance, I allow a past voice to dwell in me, The spirit of Kara, a friend whose life was severed."
A flash of Green light. Then, exactly as Kara had Described, except Kara was taller. Layla's new form was awoken..
"So....Leo, what do you think?"
"Even though your voices are one, I can tell it was you, Layla. I love it, you look beautiful."
My eyes were filled with joyful tears, I Took hold of Layla, and ran my fingers through her wavy, Jet Black Hair.


"I love you,"
Both Kara and Layla Spoke.
"I love you too..."



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Re: Two Become One (Shards Pt. III)
« Reply #1 on: August 13, 2010, 02:15:49 AM »
Wow, I was right, it was longer.

Pt. III Done
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Re: Two Become One (Shards Pt. III)
« Reply #2 on: August 13, 2010, 02:37:23 AM »
 I love it :)
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Re: Two Become One (Shards Pt. III)
« Reply #3 on: August 13, 2010, 02:43:52 AM »
I know, its mostly Dialogue.
However, There is a reason for it. I did that, to elaborate on Layla, She is a main Character, as are Kara and Leo.
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Re: Two Become One (Shards Pt. III)
« Reply #4 on: August 13, 2010, 03:05:03 AM »
I read them all... Speechess.
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Re: Two Become One (Shards Pt. III)
« Reply #5 on: August 13, 2010, 03:16:55 AM »
I wonder how Layla's are gunna take this ;)
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Re: Two Become One (Shards Pt. III)
« Reply #6 on: August 13, 2010, 03:37:05 AM »
I wonder how Layla's are gunna take this ;)

No offense, but can you clarify that?
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Re: Two Become One (Shards Pt. III)
« Reply #7 on: August 13, 2010, 04:02:10 AM »
Sorry Layla's PARENTS. I mean if I came sharing my body with some dead person my parents would be freaked.
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Re: Two Become One (Shards Pt. III)
« Reply #8 on: August 13, 2010, 04:11:59 AM »
What About Kara's Parents =P ::)
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Re: Two Become One (Shards Pt. III)
« Reply #9 on: August 13, 2010, 04:19:23 AM »
Kara's parents would probably be happy and creeped out like "She's back from the dead! It's a miracle!" and "She's back from the dead!?!?"
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Re: Two Become One (Shards Pt. III)
« Reply #10 on: August 13, 2010, 04:21:17 AM »
Maybe I could make a Sidestory: Explanations.
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Re: Two Become One (Shards Pt. III)
« Reply #11 on: August 13, 2010, 04:23:57 AM »
Maybe  ::)
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Re: Two Become One (Shards Pt. III)
« Reply #12 on: August 13, 2010, 04:26:23 AM »
Wow/Lol That would be funny!!
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Re: Two Become One (Shards Pt. III)
« Reply #13 on: August 13, 2010, 04:27:56 AM »
PART 3 ALREADY?
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Re: Two Become One (Shards Pt. III)
« Reply #14 on: August 13, 2010, 04:29:01 AM »
Opinion?
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