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Author Topic: Iggy's Poems  (Read 6609 times)

Offline Iggy

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Iggy's Poems
« on: April 09, 2011, 02:07:32 PM »
Hey everyone! I'm going to post my poems here! See what you think of them!  ;D

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US/UK Poem

The US and the UK, have had a rocky past,
They have spilt brotherly blood on their land,
Lets make a friendship, that will forever last,
arm in arm, hand in hand,

To the present day, we have worked as a team,
To fight frightful wars, to keep us free,
To make the world happy, that is our dream,
To live together, in happiness and glee.

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Japanese Earthquake/Tsunami

Japan, which is the land of peace,
Has endured something tragic,
The nuclear clouds are begining to increase,
What could help them? Magic?

But, Japan is staying strong,
During these horrid times,
May their country, live forever long,
That's why I'm writing these rhymes.

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Romance Poem

I feel so warm,
Might it be love?
It's like a great storm,
from the heavens above,
Might this be love I feel?
It makes me feel strong,
Do I feel this for real?
Or could this love be wrong
?

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Tomato Poem

Something tasty and also red,
It's shiny and really round,
It's soft, just like a bed,
It also doesn't grow in the ground,

It has a stalk, right on the top,
When it's dark red, that's when it's ripe,
When you start eating, you can never stop,
If it stains clothes, it'll take a good wipe!

Tomato is used in a lot of things,
For example, tomato sauce,
It's food, fit for the king's!
In the banquet of a main course!
 


What do you think of them?
« Last Edit: April 11, 2011, 06:33:19 AM by Iggy »

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Re: Iggy's Poems
« Reply #1 on: April 09, 2011, 02:11:25 PM »
I think they're pretty good, but the ones with an odd number of lines sound a little weird to me.
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Re: Iggy's Poems
« Reply #2 on: April 09, 2011, 02:21:22 PM »
Thanks!

You're right... They sound really corny and weird.

I'll fix it!  ;D

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Re: Iggy's Poems
« Reply #3 on: April 09, 2011, 02:24:32 PM »
Not corny, just... Incomplete.
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Re: Iggy's Poems
« Reply #4 on: April 09, 2011, 02:32:31 PM »
There we go! Fix'd!  ;)

Thanks for helping improve them!  ;D

It's about time I improve my English skills.  ::)

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Re: Iggy's Poems
« Reply #5 on: April 09, 2011, 02:37:33 PM »
Way to go, Iggy. =3
By loving so many, I have touched their lives and helped them rebirth as well. To be strong is to instill strength in another.

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Re: Iggy's Poems
« Reply #6 on: April 11, 2011, 04:53:07 AM »
I like them! I like what you're poems are about, like the tsunami.
Love the person, hate the sin.

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Re: Iggy's Poems
« Reply #7 on: April 11, 2011, 04:58:47 AM »
 *looks closely at the words to see if Harley is hidden somewhere in there... Gasp in amazement when finds nothing...* good work iggy!!!!

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Re: Iggy's Poems
« Reply #8 on: April 11, 2011, 05:47:03 AM »
Great poems Iggy! It would be interesting if you added a few more lines, 'cause apparently you're good at rhyming.

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Re: Iggy's Poems
« Reply #9 on: April 11, 2011, 06:30:41 AM »
Hey thanks everyone! As most of you probably know by now... I love tomatoes.


Tomato Poem

Something tasty and also red,
It's shiny and really round,
It's soft, just like a bed,
It also doesn't grow in the ground,

It has a stalk, right on the top,
When it's dark red, that's when it's ripe,
When you start eating, you can never stop,
If it stains clothes, it'll take a good wipe!

Tomato is used in a lot of things,
For example, tomato sauce,
It's food, fit for the king's!
In the banquet of a main course! 






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Re: Iggy's Poems
« Reply #10 on: April 13, 2011, 07:45:24 PM »
The romance poem was quite good. Keep it up!

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Re: Iggy's Poems
« Reply #11 on: April 14, 2011, 11:56:23 PM »
Good as they may be,
enhancements are truly liked,
but for you,
you've got it all right. :)

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Re: Iggy's Poems
« Reply #12 on: September 19, 2011, 10:33:02 PM »
Hey guys.

I thought I'd just let you know that Iggy was actually me.

Good day. ~

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Re: Iggy's Poems
« Reply #13 on: September 19, 2011, 10:44:13 PM »
Powerpoke is Iggy is Harley4life. Makes perfect sense.
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Re: Iggy's Poems
« Reply #14 on: September 20, 2011, 02:07:51 AM »
Why didn't you just use your iggy profile?
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