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quest idea i had

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Silver:

--- Quote from: Trainerx on April 26, 2011, 03:20:01 AM ---I didn't really understand that post, but it's still too short. You need to add more than that. What happens after you find out that the guy is part of an evil corporation? What happens when you save the lady?

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Be careful with questions like that.
Though I agree its too short, your other questions have a chance to not matter, though in this case they do, as he very specifically said level 47 steelix. Thats about midgame, so whatever 'group' there is, you would be very aware of them by now.

But lets just say, this is low level, you're new to Miryus and you do this quest, and the pokemon is, i dunno, a zubat or something.

Why, and how would you know that this person is part of an evil corporation?
And after saving this woman would constitute a reward would it not? And end everything, as your job is done and you have whatever you recieved?

If this was a low level quest, it would be allowed to be somewhat open ended, but because it HAS to be a LEVEL 47 STEELIX, alot more work has to be done.

himoo1:
you can decide once again to be good or evil and give the pokemon to the lady and capture the guy and find out about his corporation (don't know what it should be called maybe Izigle?) to shut it down, or give it to the evil guy and have the woman move to a completely different region because you gave up her pokemon. The rewards for giving it to the lady is once again a longer quest and if you give it to the bad guy, you get a rare candy and a level 20 random non-legendary pokemon. When you figure out the headquarters of the corporation to shut it down you have to go through each trainer looking for a pass to go up for each floor (total of 5 floors) each level gets harder, once you reach the top you face the trainer who tried to steal the steelix, which if you lose you have to redo the whole building, if you win the corporation is shutdown, you gain pokemoney, ill let you know when i know how much the goods will be in the game, and you also get a level 25 pokemon of your choice of these three: Onix, Pikachu, or Machop. 
Thanks for all of the criticism it is helping me with this idea.

Declan_23:
Okay, I like the extended version a lot better. However, making it longer doesn't make it more detailed. If you can take all the ideas you have now, and formulate them into one quest with details such as:
 - How do you find out the guy is evil?
 - How do you find out where the old lady is from?
 - Who gives you your reward?
etc.

FireDarkGuy:
I think you have a good imagination, but, your quest is having TOO MUCH ACTIONS. The quests needs to be simple and to evolve a pokemon at level 47 for a quest it's really hard. Why you don't try something easiest.

Jerry:
I think too it's getting better now, but having the pieces here and there doesn't help much. Okay, I'll try to merge it all...

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You enter a cave and a trainer runs towards you asking you to catch its pokemon because it broke loose of its ball that his parents gave him. It has been in his family for a while... [spoiler]'It' here refers to what exactly? ???[/spoiler]

You can either decide to be good or evil and catch it and keep it or catch it and give it back...

If you give it back the reward will not be as good but you will be able to feel like you did the right thing. The pokemon would be a steelix at level 47 (yes i know im specific haha). The quest then continues because after a while you find out he was a pokemon thief and his plan of using a dark ball to capture the steelix didn't work. The ball however somehow exploded and the steelix managed to get away. So when he saw you coming in, he acted as if it was his. He lied, trying to make you get it for him. He in fact tied up an older lady and that Steelix was hers. He locked her into a warehouse, because he was an evil person working for an unknown corporation.

You can decide once again to be good or evil and give the pokemon to the lady and capture the guy and find out about his corporation (don't know what it should be called maybe Izigle?) to shut it down. The rewards for giving it to the lady is once again a longer quest.

Or you decide to give Steelix to the evil guy and have the woman move to a completely different region because you gave up her pokemon. Here, you get a rare candy and a level 20 random non-legendary pokemon.

When you figure out the headquarters of the corporation to shut it down, you have to go through each trainer looking for a pass to go up for each floor (total of 5 floors) each level gets harder. Once you reach the top you face the trainer who tried to steal the Steelix and challenge him. If you lose you have to redo the whole building, but otherwise, the corporation is shutdown and you gain pokemoney.

I'll let you know when I know how much the goods will be in the game, and you also get a level 25 pokemon of your choice of these three: Onix, Pikachu, or Machop. [spoiler]I thought it was level 20? ???[/spoiler]

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Well, that's getting some shape. If you could now add the answers to Declan's questions, that'd be even better!

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