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[Quest] Diving for Fossils

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Yume Tsuki:
I'm writing this quest after looking at the thread about gaining fossils. Since there are so many fossils there might be diffrent quests right? So I'll write one for the fossil containing a Tirtouga


Location: Beach
Requirements: The HM move Surf/The HM move Dive

You start off at a beach. A archeologist (or whatever) is standing and watching in the distant of the ocean. When you talk to him He starts telling a long story.

"Fossils are my life, I have collected many fossils on many expeditions. I heard there is a secret cavern somewhere around here. It should be underwater. Probably containing many fossils from the past life of the sea."
> Really? What kind of fossils?
> Sorry sir, I'm not intrested in your stories.

"Intrested I see? Hohoho, I can say nonetheless! Fossils are amazing and who knows what kind of fossils can be found! Too bad I can't go explore myself... I'm too old to go diving, and I have no Pokémon that can help me traveling over the vast Sea."
> Maybe I can go in your place. And get a few fossils for you.
> That's too bad... Well, I have to go now.

"Really? You really want to do that? Thank you! I'm so happy. Hey, if you find any fossils you may have one. Thank you so much!"

After this context you go out at sea using surf looking for the place to use Dive. When you find it and dive underwater there is a underwater maze. At the end of the maze you'll find a big crack in the wall. You'll enter and end up in a cave. This cave is filled with rocks and are mainly a puzzle to get through the rooms. You'll end up in a room where a person stands.

"What a rare fossils, they now belongs to us..."
"..."
"Hey, what are you looking at kid? These fossils are mine... uh I mean ours"
> Who are you talking about
> Oh sorry, I didn't know it was yours I'll leave you now.

"Mind your own business kid. Prepare to be beaten up."

Then the trainer fight begins, the guy you're fighting has a Rock type and a Water Type Pokémon.

"Ayee! No good! Flee!"

The guy runs leaving the Quest Item that was in the room. It is a Bag filled with fossils. Then you'll return to the Archeologist.

"Amazing! You were able to find some fossils!"
"..."
"Oh yeah thats right I promised you would get a fossil. A promise is a promise. Please keep one. It was already amazing you made this discovery. I got three kinds of fossils, which one do you want?"
> Dome Fossil
> Helix Fossil
> Cover Fossil

After that you get the fossil of your choise and are able revive it where they have a fossil revive company.


So.. That was my first quest... Critics are allowed so I can improve this story. ^^

Wire:
I like it but it's always you appear and the guys are just about to leave or they find the fossil just as you enter but yeah its good.

Mr. Fox:
I like that.

Jerry:
I'd say it's nice, you described the scene and branches very well, except some little tiny spelling issues ;)

You could possibly add something like:
> Who are you talking to?
> Oh I didn't know that it was yours. I'll leave you now

And maybe change it so that the man you surprise underwater has a bag of fossils. Then, the archaeologist has 'some'. Or else, I don't think that I'd give someone in his place, for this is the only specimen :O

Yume Tsuki:
Edited. ~

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