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[Quest]Eevee

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TrainerX:
 It's too short. Try to make it a little bit longer.

LeoReborn:
I assume this is a beginner's quest, hence why the quest is easy.

TrainerX:
 The thing that bothers me is that it basicly has no story to it. The quest is basicly just this.

You walk into a house.
You talk to a girl, who asks you to find her Espeon.
Her mother does the same thing.
You walk out of the house.
You battle a kid with five Eevee evolutions.
You battle a kid with the exact same pokemon, but they're at a higher levels.
You take the Espeon back to the little girl.
You get a reward.

There's no story to it that makes it interesting.

LeoReborn:
In that case, make it part of a Quest Chain.

Example: Later on you find this is common, as Pokemon keep being taken, and your task is to discover why.

Which could ultlmately stem out to the Crime Syndicate of Miryus.

TrainerX:
 That's what I was talking about. If this is a single quest, it has no story and it's uninteresting. If there's more quests related to it, there would be a storyline, and it would be more interesting.

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