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Re: [Ranger_1_Quest] Absol's Sorrow (In_Progress)
« Reply #15 on: May 19, 2011, 12:59:58 AM »
Chains are always nice, and this one seems to be slowly growing into something very intricate.

Though, a lot of the dialog could have been cleaned up. Like, a lot of it.
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Re: [Ranger_1_Quest] Absol's Sorrow (In_Progress)
« Reply #16 on: May 19, 2011, 01:48:54 AM »
Ya i know i made alot of spelling mistakes or grammar and punctuation errors, but i don't go back and fix things like that until im completely finished with the storyline.
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