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[Ranger_000_Quest] A Dragon Tale

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spirit:
Things such as levels and pokemon are actually only minutely important when in the initial stages of planning quests. The team will always review, and re-review levels, pokemon, items, awards, etc. prior to officially releasing and completing a quest, and often times afterwards as well. In fact, these things have to be taken into consideration by the balance team as well as the story writers to ensure fair play throughout the game. That said, even Bagon might not be the pokemon you are after, but who knows. We do try to keep quests authentic to what the story writer had in mind, as it is his/her vision after all.

I do enjoy this quest, it is fairly short and simple, and to the point. However, it is obvious, as with any quest, that things will be reworked, and the whole thing will need to be fleshed out, and expanded...mostly just to give it a more authentic feel, as well as to create a more significant feel in the players mind. Do you remember The Incredibles? Did you see The Incredibles? There is a scene where the mom is flying a plane that gets attacked, and remember the guy that she phoned in a favour from? originally he was going to be the pilot in the movie, and was supposed to die, but because he had such an insignificant role, they cut him as it didn't have the same emotional impact as a more important character would. We would employ the same techniques here (if needed)

My biggest suggestions to this quest are as follows: 1) This should not be the only way to get a Bagon, just another method of doing so. Perhaps an easier method. 2) The player should have the ability (like in the show) to locate a new habitat for this pokemon he 'rescued', and possibly report back to the rangers (or another authority figure) about the location he discovered as a perfect home for the pokemon, spawning research and/or tourism to the area.

I recommend you continue writing about this quest (take my suggestion, or invent your own path), and expand on where this story goes...don't worry about fleshing out what you already have, as I said, that's the sort of thing that will be worked on as development proceeds, instead, see where this story takes your imagination elsewhere.

Lastly, while this quest does (so far) have my seal of approval, that doesn't necessarily mean that it will be implemented into the game, but it does mean that it has a better chance of being considered.

shadowbt:
Thanks for liking my quest Spirit and yes i do remember the Incredibles. It makes me happy to know I don't have to worry about a pokemon's level or evolution in a quest because it will all be reworked, maybe even changed so much i won't recognize it lol.And what you just said about locating a habitat for the Bagon just spiked my imagination. After I edit this quest and update it with my new ideas, i will make more pokemon ranger based quests and it will be required to have done this quest to do any of my upcoming quest. You will see why when i update this quest witch might be tommarow afternoon  because I got stuff to do.

Jerry:
And please, show in some way what you changed to make it easier to spot what you did.

shadowbt:
well its kind of hard to show what i have changed because i have added a lot.But, you will notice it.Instead of getting the Bagon, I took spirit's idea of finding the Bagon a new habitat instead of taking it as a reward.And as a reward you got what I call the communication styler or disabled capture mode styler witch you will need to do the other pokemon ranger based quests that i am making.

Jerry:
Okay, you could have added something like:

## Everything past this point is what I just added ##

Otherwise, for small edits, you can put them in italics/bold/underlined. Reading everything again is not very practical when you already know what was there before. :)

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