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[Ranger_000_Quest] A Dragon Tale

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Jerry:
Scarce issues of punctuation and spelling, but other than the issue of cut, I think it's an okay quest.

It reminds me a little of the other recent quest involving Salamence though.

Okay, now concerning the choices,


--- Quote ---> Stop right there poacher.
> Well, you go ahead and do that.
--- End quote ---

You didn't say what happens when you choose the second option. Usually, that would mean that you 'get out of the quest' but here that's obviously no more possible. So?


--- Quote ---> Yes, of-course!
> No thanks, I already have six pokemon.
--- End quote ---

There is also the possibility that someone doesn't have a full team and at the same time, doesn't want the Bagon. Did you have that in mind?

That's all I think I have to say :)

kaj09:

--- Quote from: Ponge on May 14, 2011, 09:51:47 AM ---finally a good quest that doesn't involve fossils. ;) Good job, really.

--- End quote ---

I do the same! simply just as train, correct, fine attacks learn, and then is the ordinary good; p

shadowbt:
Thanks for liking my quest guys, and jerry I'll make some changes in those areas you told me about.If any one else sees something that needs to be changed feel free to go ahead and tell me.

Safur:
I think it's quite a good quest, but not to attack you, why is bagon that special that you can only get him with a quest.
Second point, don't you think the first evolutions of the begining of quest (onix and geodude, etc.) are something for the begin of the journey, while typlosion and dragonite are much more likely at the end of the journey. With other words: it doesn't match. So it will either become steelix and graveler of golem and the same ending or you will have to take away the end and replace it for lower leveled pokemon like quilava and dratini.

shadowbt:
Ya i had trouble deciding which pokemon to make the poacher have or what evolution of them and your right it dosn't match.If this were made in to a real quest i wouldn't know which area of the game it would be put in.Meaning I don't know what level to make the pokemon in this quest. Begging of the game = low level.mid game = neutral level and end of game = high level.
Understand? But thanks for suggesting that.I'll make those changes.

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