[OOCC] Poisoned Utopia

[Ayara012]

oiy, lexie! I do so enjoy freaking out shock. what, he's never see a girl with dragon wings before? XD
oh, and Lexie, you do Know that Flares aren't actually explosive, right? They just make heat and light.

[lubbies]

Your killing me here Cortex J. KILLING ME *dies*

[Tickles]

I denied the profiles for a reason, and will not reconsider until I get something better. Your friend sent me one, but it looked rushed, so I denied it as well. I have reasons for the things that I do, and I gave both of you reasons why so you can improve them, but if you can't understand that, I can't allow you in this RP.

[lubbies]

But you denied me full stop no reason or room for improvement I thought that was it final kaput. 

[Tickles]

The last one was because of a username thing. I denied it due to belief of fraud. Send me another profile, and I will read it, but if I see a problem with it, I'm going to deny it. I actually do read things, I don't skim.

EDIT: Once meowth makes his post, the first event will commence. It will not be a quick thing, it will have to do with deciding the fate of Utopia, and the underlands altogether. So it may take a while. Expect great moments of writing battle sequences, discoveries, losses, and gains.

[lubbies]

What about my first one you accepted then... Didn't I explain that I didn't fraud or however you say it the second one it was a mistake... I'm making sound angry but it's not. I'm only finding out some questions.

[Tickles]

I put the reason, and mistake or not, I can't take a chance. This  is one of few RP's on PU that people are interested in, whether it's participating, or just reading. If something happens to where I need to shut it down, I may end up disappointing people. That includes people who send in profiles, I need to evaluate them before I know they will actually take writing a collective story seriously.

[Bing]

I dig great moments in writing.  And lubbies, just think before you make a profile.  It doesn't take long to create something decent.  And if you really want, take time to make something nice.

[lubbies]

Ok I understand I'll try once again. 

[Hank]

Good job, lubcakes  .

[lubbies]

Please never call me lubcakes again... My char will rape you... Thanks

So what do you think of my first post?

[Tickles]

Lubbies, modify your post. Your use of grammar is pretty bad, and their is missing puncuation, for instance the use of commas seems to be missing.

[lubbies]

Ok my creative writing at school is a little rusty but I'm sure I'll get better.

[Bing]

Ok, but for real.  Why the hell is my name in your post...  I'm lost.  I'm really, really lost.

[lubbies]

The grandpa is the professer guy...