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Re: [RP] Poisoned Utopia| Time: Evening| Weather: Cloudy
« Reply #990 on: June 05, 2012, 08:27:19 PM »
Axyl keeps breathing hard looking at the celling

"Ko.... pleasse dont die....i will save you..."

she looks at the medics

"Tell Wrench... i need to save Ko.... "

she suddently falls uncouncious from exaustion that finnaly hit her hard.
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Re: [RP] Poisoned Utopia| Time: Evening| Weather: Cloudy
« Reply #991 on: June 05, 2012, 10:01:18 PM »
One of the guards heads to Wrench's quarters.

Grandpa, Axyl keeps mentioning one of our blacklisted criminals. She says she needs to save him.

Wrench heard this through the door.

Save him, but why would she want...

He walks out the room.

Where is she?

The infirmary, she collapsed, and started to hallucinate.

Wrench gets to the infirmary and sees Axyl unconscious on the table. He takes note of the readings on the monitor.

How do you have such a strong connection to him? Twin link, motherly instinct? Only makes sense since he is made from your DNA.

He thinks about it for a second, and grabs a hold of a very peculiar machine.

What would you need with a med dock...

Wrench re calibrates the machine, and transforms it into something else. He attaches a wire to Axyl's forehead.

Let's see what you see.

He starts to read Axyl's brain waves.

(He is peering into your dream or whatever is going on, so make it epic)
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Re: [RP] Poisoned Utopia| Time: Evening| Weather: Cloudy
« Reply #992 on: June 05, 2012, 11:35:35 PM »
(im not good at making things epic, but i will try))

In Axyl dream, she was seeying her body in front of her, then half of her body horizontaly disapears, showing the time her DNA was taken, it was like half of her was taken from her at the time, then on the empty art, appears Ko, shoing the missing part of her, which separates both into two bodys. After it shows the confrontations between each other, every second of the fighting of each duel they made, showing her rage and his emotions as well.

Then suddently all becomes black, and starts showing the visions that Ko had in his head, like she had them as well, showing every single bit of her past, friends, companions, then when it gets to the last one, about the location, it shows a map of its location and suddently shuts off, comes black again, and starts to get a visible image, celling, and a body straped to a table, a weak male body, Ko's body, she was seeying through his eyes in her dream, showing Dr.Weil's conversation with Ko and him, saying that he would last 3 days tops, then all goes black, as she was uncouncious living a empty dream.
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Re: [RP] Poisoned Utopia| Time: Evening| Weather: Cloudy
« Reply #993 on: June 06, 2012, 01:16:49 AM »
(I was thinking of pulling off inception, but that is unoriginal)

Wrench stopped reading the brainwaves, and use the machine to give Axyl a slight shock. The monitor started to return to normal, and her temperature was dropping. (for purpose of moving thee story along)

She should be awake in a few minutes. I need to speak her alone.

The doctors were still baffled at what just happened, but left wrench to speak with Axyl once she awoke.
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Re: [RP] Poisoned Utopia| Time: Evening| Weather: Cloudy
« Reply #994 on: June 06, 2012, 01:35:49 AM »
((mine was unoriginal, or yours was?))

After some minutes, she starts waking up slowly, she looks up and sees Wrench

"Wrench?... what are you doing here?..."

she looks arround and notices she is on the infirmary

"Why did am i in the infirmary?..."
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Re: [RP] Poisoned Utopia| Time: Evening| Weather: Cloudy
« Reply #995 on: June 06, 2012, 01:51:33 AM »
(Mine would have)

You passed out again. That shock should help stop that for a while.

He seemed a little more serious now.

I know what you are thinking, and I know I can't stop you. Just be careful, and use that sword if you must.

Wrench handed Axyl some kind of medicine.

Utopia is not the only one that experiments with things. Take this, and it will help your body heal faster. Hurry.

Wrench leaves the room. He knew Axyl had a good reason to want to rescue Ko, he figured he would ask her afterwards.

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Re: [RP] Poisoned Utopia| Time: Evening| Weather: Cloudy
« Reply #996 on: June 06, 2012, 02:31:13 AM »
Axyl takes the medicine and takes it as she looks at Wrench leaving, she smiles

"Looks like you trust me as well like i trust you...thank you..."

she gets up slowly as she was still stiff and starts walking as she goes to her room

"I better go prepared"

she gets to her room and starts arming herself with the ussual
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Re: [RP] Poisoned Utopia| Time: Evening| Weather: Cloudy
« Reply #997 on: June 06, 2012, 05:15:36 AM »
Dr. Weil feels like taunting Ko for a bit.

Well, now don't you look awful. How is you fight going, given up have we?

You know damn well what's going on.

You can read me like a book. A shame I have no further use for you, except gloat. Wait, you didn't know. Oh, Olympia.

In walks in a strange looking creature.


(Not fully transformed, more for resident evil fans)

Say hello to your brother.

~SCREEEEEEEEEEEEEE~

Hello ugly, nice to meet you. Now be a dear and get the hell out.

You amuse me Ko. You see, Olympia is the perfect organism, given the abilities of many monsters and chosens, and the highest tolerance to lead out of any of them. She will be taking care of the rebel base tomorrow afternoon. Oh, wait, you wanted to do that. Well, she asked so nicely, and I couldn't say no to that face.

Ko was kind of disgusted.

Look doc, I don't care what you do in the privacy of your lab, but I don't want to hear it.

Keep up the jokes. No one wants to die without making a grand exit. Now, have a good night.

The doc lead olympia out of the room.

Alright, I think death is the better option after seeing that.

@Meowth

A grenchlar comes charging out of nowhere.

@Aqua

A guard brings Axyl the disk she came flying in on, and stops outside the door.

Wrench gave us orders to give this to you. He made a few adjustments, saying it flies a bit quieter now.

He sets it down on the floor outside of her room and leaves.

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The caravan of rebels reach the monster city.
« Last Edit: June 09, 2012, 01:33:24 AM by Cortex J. »
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Re: [RP] Poisoned Utopia| Time: Evening| Weather: Cloudy
« Reply #998 on: June 09, 2012, 02:09:32 AM »
Leeta Hears the grenchler, grabs solomon and jumps out of the way.........WHY! WHY IS IT ALWAYS A GRENCHLER?! WHY!

Leeta jumps out of the way as it charges again.WELL THIS IS GOING TO SET US BA-

Leeta dropped her guard as she was talking and gets hit and slammed HARD into a wall.HEY! It wasn't me for once!....why am I happy?I shouldn't be happy. my best friend just got slammed into a wall and could be dead.

The grenchler turns at Solomon and Starts running at him.Aaaaaah crap.

He barely manages to dodge the grenchler and starts running towards Leeta. He gets there and see's that she is knocked out, but, "okay", but could have some broken bones. He grabs her and happens to move out of teh way. the grenchler slams into the wall beside him.HAH! YOU MISSED US! I didn't see you coming, BUT YOU MISSED!

He then starts running. the grenchler didn't understand what he said. but it knew that it was a insult. RUNNING RUNNING RUNNIIIIING!

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Re: [RP] Poisoned Utopia| Time: Evening| Weather: Cloudy
« Reply #999 on: June 09, 2012, 02:28:55 PM »
We stopped at what looked like an empty patch of land.

.. Where's the city?

2- It's cloaked right now, a powerful monster protects the city with a cloak to keep the Utopians from finding it. It's kinda like that force-feild the Utopians have.

1-C'mon, let's focus on the mission.

We started walking twards the empty spot, and then we stopped.

One of the rebel's looked twards me.1-Alright, it's your go.

Huh?

1- Only monsters can gain acess to the city. Just touch the wall, and they'll let us in.

But, if there's survivors, how did they get in?

Because they had a monster on their team, now are you gonna go or what?

I nodded and walked forward, then I noticed a wobly kind of space in front of me. I touched it, and then I suddenly felt like my mind was being probed.

Who are you...?

I was utterly shocked, not expecting this. But I kept calm and replied.

I'm Urusu... I'm from the rebel's...

A rebel...? Other's like you came here... Are you in search of them?

Yes, they were from a cargo that was supposed to come here, but they were ambushed. Are they here?

Yes... Our medical group is helping them... I will allow you and your comrades access to pick them up...

I was shot back to reality and then suddenly the invisible wall fades slightly in the front, revealing a city.

Whoah...

1-Well then, we're in?

Yes, and there are survivors, they're being treated now.

3- Well then, let's go.

We walked past the sheild into the city, and it closed behind us.

(I kinda went crazy with my imagination here, so if there's something wrong I'll change it.)
« Last Edit: June 09, 2012, 02:34:43 PM by 9Nexalas6 »
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Re: [RP] Poisoned Utopia| Time: Evening| Weather: Cloudy
« Reply #1000 on: June 10, 2012, 12:03:24 AM »
Wrench sees that the medic made it into the city without any more trouble and sets his sights on Solomon and Leeta. In his state of shock, he fears that trying to contact them will only be a distraction. He pulls up a shot of Ayara and Shock walking toward their destination, and notices how silent they are, and decides to leave them be. He sees the imps waiting for a reply from the village elders.

A few minor bumps, but nothing too bad to worry about.

In the back of his mind, all he could think about was Axyl's intention to save Ko.

How could she know if he is in danger or not?

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Re: [RP] Poisoned Utopia| Time: Evening| Weather: Cloudy
« Reply #1001 on: June 10, 2012, 10:42:01 AM »
The Elder's brought me back into the room, for some reason excluding Salreth; once I was in the room and the door was tightly sealed they began to speak in Street Imp.

"We have considered your offer."
"What is your decision Elder?"
"We will send our finest warriors. Your champion's display of mercy won us over quite well. But we have a condition..."
"What is your condition Elder?"
"You stay here and act as a intermediary."
I was stunned, surly there were other's better suited for this task."I am sure the rebels can find another far better for the job..."
"Noncense! Who else can speak Street Imp, know the needs of the Imps, and stand up of our causes?!"
He had a valid point, but I wasn't a politician, I was a common thief... "Let me consolt with my leaders, they will want to know about this."
He waved his hand bringing in two guards who led me out as he told me I had till the end of the night to make my decision. As expected Salreth was waiting for me to emerge, and once she did she started asking me questions; but the only one that mattered was about the alliance.

"They want me act as intermediary. I need speak to Wrench, you have communicator device?"
She searched her stuff and brought out the device she used to speak with the headquarters. She handed it over to me after showing me how to use it. I walked out of ear shot of Salreth then pressed the "Talk" button. "This Uallgarg, anyone there?"

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Re: [RP] Poisoned Utopia| Time: Evening| Weather: Cloudy
« Reply #1002 on: June 10, 2012, 03:32:16 PM »
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A transmission comes in.

This is Wrench. Uallgarg, how are the negotiations going?

(Le Ko)

Ko was still in the same position, but feeling a lot worse than before, and beginning to lose consciousness.

I must stay awake....no telling what he'll do to me if I fall asleep.
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Re: [RP] Poisoned Utopia| Time: Evening| Weather: Cloudy
« Reply #1003 on: June 11, 2012, 03:36:44 AM »
There is static for a moment before Wrench's voice comes in loud and clear.
"This is Wrench. Uallgarg, how are the negotiations going?"
"Good, Elder agree send strongest warriors. One condition, I stay as Intermediary."

I gripped the communicator a little bit tighter, I was sure of Wrench's response. He was going to tell me to stay, we needed all the allies we needed, regardless of my inexperience.

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Re: [RP] Poisoned Utopia| Time: Evening| Weather: Cloudy
« Reply #1004 on: June 11, 2012, 03:56:27 AM »
As convenient as that might be, I need you here. I actually wanted to send Salreth there for a specific reason. The colony you're in, is her old one. She will not remember them because of how young she was when we found her, but I spent the whole time looking for survivors. I believe her brother is still alive. If you can get them to talk, maybe they will still join us without you having to be there.

Wrench processed some more of the information.

Then again, having you there can mean better training for you. It's up to the two of you, locate Salreth's brother, or stay with the imps to act as Intermediary.

RP Closed until further notice
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