Paperdoll Competition

[zylonnick]

I also decided to make a new entry, was just thinking what I would want my character to be customized like, and came up with this. If there are no major problems with it I'll do the rest too.
 

This one's pretty impressive Genbor. Nice job.

[Yume Tsuki]

yeah, with the G for... Hm... What would it stand for... I wouldn't know...
Maybe team Galactic. /shot

[genbor]

 Very good Yuki, you are too good at this game.

[Declan_23]

Why PU banned me from making pixel art.....

[genbor]

 It is definitely... unique, Delcan. Nice job

[Darkstar64]

So, no comments for mine? It's this one by the way:

[Tickles]

I'm no good at pixeling, so I can't provide constructive criticism. To prove how much I suck, here is what I made this one, hopefully it sucks enough to inspire someone to make it better.



Also a reason I stick to writing.

[Ice Warrior Astral]

Here is the second version of my work.If there is anything that I can do to improve it more just say.

[Monzta]

Darkstar, I just need to ask what those white circly things are above his shoulders.
I'd really like some feedback on mine.

[Darkstar64]

They're his hood, but it doesn't look like one...

I think yours is really good. I'd make the edges around the horns a little darker

[Pokemaster MAC]

GAAAAAAAAH....



That being said... I'm jealous you guys can do this pixel art stuff. Most art I can do is food presentation art. And the model that was from Declan, when i saw it i was thinking this:


Biker + Swimmer(M) =Declan's model

It's not bad, it's vividly imaginative. Gotta know how to think like an artist eh?

[genbor]

 @Monzta: Looks great already, don't know what I would change.

 @Darkstar64: I had the same idea for the hood, but since it looked like a blob behind his back, I decided to put some lines to set it more apart. You could try it as well.

 @Ice Warrior Astral: Maybe make the hair a bit longer or add hair below. Right now it looks bald from behind & sides. Also try adding some shading.

[Ice Warrior Astral]

I don't know what is wrong with my shading skills. I just want to know if I got this right with this.

[Yume Tsuki]

@Ice Warrior Astral: The main problem I see in your shading is Pillow-Shading, meaning that your shading goes from dark to light fromout the outlines this can give a weird effect to how 3d-ish the sprite looks. next to that the sprites going sideways look a bit odd. Although the design is quite fine it looks like they shaved his head from underneath and they stopped at the middle of the headheight making longer hair hang over it. While the front sprite shows some sort of spiky hair texture in the front of his head, while I can't see the spiky hair back in the side sprites. Apart from that the clothes look fine.

@ Monzta: The main outlines of the body are dark to black. Making the helmet with horns' outline stand out being too light for the sprite. you should make the outlines a tad darker. Further it's quite good.

@ Darkstar64: At first I thought those things were supposed to be some sort of earrings. But I reminded myself that earrings should hang on ears, not on the neck and gave myself the idea that it was supposed to be some kind of hoodie. You probably wanted to show us clearly that your design was supposed to have a hoodie but it's should be made a bit flatter. Otherwise I see a hoodie in my mind being supported with iron thread so it stays straight backwards. It doesn't mind if the hoodie can't be seen properly in the front sprite. In the side- and backsprites you can show it some more. Next to that I really like the design of the sprite so far.

@ Lubbies: Just as I trold Astral, the hair has pillow shading making it look a bit odd. Also the trenchcoat seems to be lacking shading. and you shouldn't use pitchblack as part of the shading.

[Declan_23]

I take it from everybody's lack of criticism that my sprites are perfect. Thanks guys!