Paperdoll Competition

[nightshade06]

HURRY LIGHT OUT THAT FIRE ON HIS HEAD!... jks the jacket looks a bit pale on the left of the frontal view 1 and 2 on the side views theres that wierd shininess going around the ear that looks a bit out of place but overall it's great (although could use a little more shading) Not bad for your 2nd try and the eyes dont look right, look at the front page for reference.

Lawls that was the first thing I thought about when I posted it on here..Was that he looked like he was on fire..XD

Also can you explain what you mean by shiny? XD I don't see it.

[lubbies]

Well that's my opinion.

[nightshade06]

Before







After



I hope I fixed it XD haha



After After....lol


(edit) Fixed what I seen on the pants  Gunna submit that last one as my final lol I am too new at it to make it perfect

[lubbies]

Better but still a tiny bit funny. The jackets shades don't meld that well, either find darker colors to suit the outside or lighter ones for the interior, I only noticed this now but the standing back views pants look very strange. The jackets arms look too much like the skin color. I must say though it looks much better.

[nightshade06]

Better but still a tiny bit funny. The jackets shades don't meld that well, either find darker colors to suit the outside or lighter ones for the interior, I only noticed this now but the standing back views pants look very strange. The jackets arms look too much like the skin color. I must say though it looks much better.

Now that you mention that on the back view standing one yea you are right it is odd...lol

Ok I edited it again I still see a few things wrong with my pants but didn't notice till after I posted it but yea the most distinct thing you will see I changed is his hair....Lol....I was sitting there thinking what was wrong with this sprite then it hit me....There sure was a crap load of orange on him...Soooooo I changed it

[lubbies]

Lol looks quite wierd with green hair the arms on the side/standing still look a little skin colory.

Anyway since it's nearing the 25 May, 9:30 here I'll post my final:



The hair still looks not as I'd liked it to look but That's what I got.

[nightshade06]

Lol yea I just didn't like how much orange I had on him....And also I like his green hair

[Ice Warrior Astral]

Hope this last version is good enough.

[Henkie]

Hey guys,

I only found out about this thread yesterday so I"m not done yet. Only the frontal sprite is done but I hope to finish the rest tonight. This is my first time doing any spriting so feedback is welcome

[Mr_Dark]

Hey guys,

I only found out about this thread yesterday so I"m not done yet. Only the frontal sprite is done but I hope to finish the rest tonight. This is my first time doing any spriting so feedback is welcome

Only thing I can comment on is the hair. Try to make the black lining more natural, ex. make it a color that matches the hair.

[lubbies]

yeah those black lines are standing out WAY too much. make it a darkish mustard or just take the yellow and darken it so it blends well. Don't make it too dark though.

[Henkie]

Finished! Thanks for the feedback guys! Really useful. I hope this is better because I don't have time to change it anymore tomorrow. So this will be my final versions.

I wasn't sure about the height of the sideward view so I just did two different heights.

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[Bryan]

This thread will now be locked. I will now collect all entries and start a poll. Good luck to everyone, you all surprised me and we got some hood entries.