Paperdoll Competition: Round 2 (Voting)

[Bryan]

You guys have til this Saturday to have your entry polished and ready for voting.

[genbor]

 Well thanks for giving me another chance, I found I am actually enjoying the pixel art business quite a bit, and wouldn't mind learning to do it properly. I took over the emo assignment and tried to shade it in a new way than how I did before. Hopefully it improved.

[Pokemaster MAC]

Well thanks for giving me another chance, I found I am actually enjoying the pixel art business quite a bit, and wouldn't mind learning to do it properly. I took over the emo assignment and tried to shade it in a new way than how I did before. Hopefully it improved.

In my opinion, it just looks creepy. Not exactly emo, just a little weird/creepy.

[rajlev]

i think the emo idea its good... but the purple line in the head its a litle to much...  think its better only the purple on the hair that hides the eye....

[CelaGhost]

Well thanks for giving me another chance, I found I am actually enjoying the pixel art business quite a bit, and wouldn't mind learning to do it properly. I took over the emo assignment and tried to shade it in a new way than how I did before. Hopefully it improved.

It's pretty good. I like the side view especially the one on the right, the shading is really nice looking. I feel like I'm seeing a weird circle on the chest and back for the frontal and back view though.. A few minor things - the hair doesn't blend right between the black and purple parts(it's just too straight), the mascara looks a bit creepy in the frontal view(a single black outline), and.. it's too purple! Maybe make the pants a different darker color.. or.. add a black or light purple shirt but the sleeves will still have purple and black stripes cause I see "emo" people wear striped stockings and sleeves but never a full striped shirt.. and.. and.. a cute dark/ghost pokemon face on the back would be a nice touch me thinks.

Amphi sorry to hear that, you were great competition 

Done

I think it'll look better with some muscle lines like some pecs. You could even add a shoulder plate. Anyway, it looks good so far. I think he has a beard? but I can't really tell right away.

JerryEdit: Posts merged.

[genbor]

 Yes, I know it's a little creepy, and honestly, many emos tend to dress and look creepy (not all of course) and since the colors are darker (black and purple) that sort of makes it a bit creepier. The striped shirt reminds me of a skeleton but I kind of like how it turned out. The stripe at the back is there because without it i felt it was too empty and plain, so I think i'll keep it there. I was also thinking of adding a logo to the back, but that was already mentioned for the Roman Cos-player. I might make one on the front though, just to see how it looks. Thanks for the advices I'll see what I can do about it.

[Yume Tsuki]

where be the outlines genbor? they be too light D:

[genbor]

 I decided to remove the black outlines from the skin, and used lighter, more skin colored outlines trying to give off a better impression on being pale. If they make it worse I can re-edit them.

[lubbies]

The eye placement on the frontal view is a little weird for me, it looks to high. Right now on an iPad so I'm hoping to get my laptop by today to finish off.

[genbor]

 Well what I did there, was remove one line from the eye (bottom one; eye = 3 lines) and replaced it with the "eyeliner", because when I used an eyeliner on the whole eye, it just looked like a big monocle.

ShedinjaEDIT: Here's the (hopefully) improved version. I modified some things that were pointed out to the best of my ability, and to my liking. I couldn't do a cute ghost/dark Pokémon's face due to spacial issues, but I made a PokéBand's logo (my own creation). Made it a bit more like a jacket with buttons because on it's own was a bit too plain for my taste.

 

[Monzta]

Slight touch-up, I guess this is my final entry.

[rajlev]

woow that to seams preaty good Genbor!!... i think it really seems like a emo guy... it has all the style with it... The pokeband its pretty god and it really sees like a emo jaket

Also Monzta the king seems awesome!!! great job!!!... but it seems like the last image of the frontal view has the sceptre in the other hand... i dont know if it was the intencion but its the only of the images that has the sceptre on the left hand...

JerryEdit: Posts merged.

[Jake101]

Slight touch-up, I guess this is my final entry.

The second one on the top, then go to the bottom, yeah, he's holding the staff in his left hand on that sprite...how come no one else noticed it?

[genbor]

 I noticed it before, pointed it out, and learned that it was intentional.

[Jake101]

Say what!!!