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The war of the rapidash and gyarados gyms
Minsi:
Ah, I didn't know you've never played that one, I'm sorry. It just seemed very similar to that game.
It might help if perhaps there were more events leading up to the legendary part of the quest. For example the trainer could be required to beat all the opponents on the opposite team in order to retrieve a certain item that helps with the quest. Just a suggestion though. :]
Kuhns:
--- Quote --- The War of Gyarados versus and Rapidash
A This quest that changes place every day. like on Fridays it will be on 1st island on Tuesday it will be on the 6th island and so on..
Anyway, you swim across a small pond with an island in the middle where there’s two people--a guy in a Gyarados costume and a chick in a Rapidash costume--arguing about which a gym on the??? a secret island. They are, apparently, going to join for the war there because both sides and are recruiting members.
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I don't think a quest like this can be implemented in the game. As you...describe it, there has to be a tiny island on each island, and from those tiny, and completely random, islands, comes a fight between two opposite leaders. This alone is kind of...a useless idea. A random note (leading to the fight location/dock) or something of that nature would be much more plausible.
--- Quote ---The two unofficial gyms are called: The Flaming Rapidash Gym and The other gym is called the Flying Sprinkler Gyarados Gym.
You may can join either side but may can choose to switch sides in middle of the quest later on.
You talk to the two kids and then once you talk to both of them talk to the one you want to join one of the gyms with After talking to both, you are given the choice to join one or the other. then After, you hop on a boat based on which gym you choose. If you choose the Gyarados gym you will set sail on a boat with a red Gyarados painted on the mast, and the same goes for the Rapidash gym except the boats are is red and the mast has a Rapidash that’s standing on its hind legs.
While on the boats there’s a sub-mission were you have to board the opposite coloured other ship. before the boarding of the enemy ship You have to choose one of the other rookies on your ship to help you because all the battles are tag battles. (the trainer you choose waits at gate of gym and you can choose to go with them during the battles)
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Why do the players have to board the enemy ship? And why are the enemy ships traveling together at the same time?
--- Quote ---After you arrive on the island which you find out that the island is actually just two islands that were join by a volcano on one in the middle of one half there’s a large volcano filled with fire PokémonAnd on the other side is a giant lake filled with rare water Pokémon You then land on an island that is split in two and separated by a large volcano. One side contains a massive lake and the other is a hot rocky surface.
[Unknown to either gym that the war is because Kygore and Groudon you walk up to your Oppent head of the gym and discover they used to be brothers and that they were the first to discover the island on that eve they discovered it on brother was visited by Groudon and the other by Kygore while they were exploring you walk were the two islands join and Rayquaza comes before you and uses a telepathy to tell you that he is sick of the fighting and the only way to calm Kygore is to defeat Groudon and the way to calm Groudon is to defeat Kygore after that Rayquaza gives you a ride to the lairs of each were you discover that Rayquaza set them against each other Groudon and Kygore join you to defeat Rayquaza you may only use Kygore and Groudon to defeat Rayquaza] <----???
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Um...if I understand it, the enemy gym leaders were opposite genders right? So...how can they be brothers? Unless the chick suddenly changes gender halfway through and in that case you should really make a note of it. The rest is confusing and I rather not get into it. It has potential, but it is far from actual quest material (IMO). Clean up some of your prose and think about your storyline a bit more.
stephenkill2:
bahaha , kuhns you made me lol, and good points 0_o
obi:
--- Quote from: Kuhns on March 10, 2010, 07:55:43 AM ---Um...if I understand it, the enemy gym leaders were opposite genders right? So...how can they be brothers? Unless the chick suddenly changes gender halfway through and in that case you should really make a note of it.
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Well, in duotent's defense;
--- Quote from: duotent on March 09, 2010, 10:34:13 AM ---discover they used to be brothers
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That would be pretty epic though.
Trainer called back RAPIDASH
Trainer sent out [words deleted]
What will you do?
FIGHT BAG
POKEMON >RUN
Kuhns:
--- Quote from: obi on March 10, 2010, 08:03:53 AM ---
--- Quote from: Kuhns on March 10, 2010, 07:55:43 AM ---Um...if I understand it, the enemy gym leaders were opposite genders right? So...how can they be brothers? Unless the chick suddenly changes gender halfway through and in that case you should really make a note of it.
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Well, in duotent's defense;
--- Quote from: duotent on March 09, 2010, 10:34:13 AM ---discover they used to be brothers
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That would be pretty epic though.
Trainer called back RAPIDASH
Trainer sent out [words deleted]
What will you do?
FIGHT BAG
POKEMON >RUN
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That proves nothing! xD
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The final plot twist.... The hot chick is actually a man!
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