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Creative Discussions => Fan Fiction & Writing => Topic started by: Marissa on May 21, 2010, 11:53:36 PM

Title: Silenced Art: Poems of Selfishness
Post by: Marissa on May 21, 2010, 11:53:36 PM
I was going through my old stuff and found these old poems.  They're bad, but I guess I will share them with you...

1)Here's all these wars,
all this hate and despair,
children in hunger,
babies in danger;
Then I think to my self....
who cares?

2)The body burned like paper in fire,
and the other men did not desire;
Their flesh and their blood filled the floor
oh!  It was the sweet scent of gore,
their beautiful cacophony of screams!
blood was running in streams....
I have no regret.
Shh! Its a secret <3
Title: Re: Silenced Art: Poems of Selfishness
Post by: Mr Pokemon on May 22, 2010, 11:50:51 AM
The poems are pretty good, but... disturbing.
I only hope they are not about you :P
Title: Re: Silenced Art: Poems of Selfishness
Post by: marijan2 on May 22, 2010, 03:15:40 PM
interesting indeed...
Title: Re: Silenced Art: Poems of Selfishness
Post by: ChibiVampire on May 22, 2010, 08:55:11 PM
Thank you for sharing..! ^_^
Title: Re: Silenced Art: Poems of Selfishness
Post by: Raikt on May 22, 2010, 10:33:31 PM
I enjoyed reading them.
Title: Re: Silenced Art: Poems of Selfishness
Post by: Marissa on May 23, 2010, 06:33:32 PM
Thank you all for the input.
Title: Re: Silenced Art: Poems of Selfishness
Post by: ChibiVampire on May 23, 2010, 07:56:18 PM
Your welcome, you should just up some more of these. I's sure many people would like to read them... >:3!
Title: Re: Silenced Art: Poems of Selfishness
Post by: Marissa on May 25, 2010, 12:18:31 AM
Your welcome, you should just up some more of these. I's sure many people would like to read them... >:3!
I will probably do this eventually.  But the poems are all on paper, not computer, so I have to type them up first.
Title: Re: Silenced Art: Poems of Selfishness
Post by: ChibiVampire on May 25, 2010, 01:37:29 AM
Oh... I wouldn't want to bother you with that then...
But... If you want... XD!