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Title: Out of Reach, I Chase Her Anyway. <2>
Post by: LeoReborn on November 24, 2010, 04:08:20 AM

(Fry, this is what I was getting at.)

Part 2
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How did this happen?
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I am Solin, and I recently moved here from Houston, Texas. Pullsprings High is an odd place, My "welcome" was that of a beautiful girl, she had hair the color of a dark scarlet, and her eyes, oh man, her eyes were also scarlet, but a bright, almost demonic shade that pulled me in. She wore all-black. Typical T-Shirt for her age, eighteen I'd say, but not low-cut. Her overall Black apparel made her Lunatic eyes stand out even more, I was practically under her spell.

Well, maybe the demonic part was right, because she was harassing me fairly rough. I'm not a stalker, but that's she saw me as apparently.

She was pushing me away, and hurling insults like it was her life story, but I couldn't hate her for it. Normally, I would, but those eyes.... they were keeping me fixed, and I knew I was hooked.
I was in love with her. Her body and voice communicated, "I hate your guts," but her eyes spoke entirely in another tone, "I don't really know what to think of you right now, but let's see what my charm can do." If that's what she was really thinking, it was anchoring my soul to hers, and my gray, smokey eyes to her piercing, neon eyes. I couldn't pull away at all. Her charm was working easily.

Title: Re: Out of Reach, I Chase Her Anyway. <2>
Post by: Frenchfry on November 24, 2010, 04:13:42 AM

Mhm... You know, Leo, if I didn't know better, I'd say you have a crush on a girl that acts like a jerk to you.
But that's just what I got from the story.

Title: Re: Out of Reach, I Chase Her Anyway. <2>
Post by: Declan_23 on November 24, 2010, 09:48:53 PM

Quote from: Frenchfry on November 24, 2010, 04:13:42 AM

Mhm... You know, Leo, if I didn't know better, I'd say you have a crush on a girl that act like a jerk to you.
But that's just what I got from the story.

This, most of your stories seem to follow a similar theme...
You wanna talk?

Title: Re: Out of Reach, I Chase Her Anyway. <2>
Post by: LeoReborn on November 25, 2010, 12:10:01 AM

1:) I have a girlfriend
2:) She is not a jerk
3:) I'm fine, in fact this story has nothing to do with me.
4:) My stories do have a common theme: Love.


This story is just to demonstrate my writing ability.

That is all I'm telling you guys though [spoiler]No, I am NOT Spoiling anything.[/spoiler]

Title: Re: Out of Reach, I Chase Her Anyway. <2>
Post by: Frenchfry on November 25, 2010, 01:09:14 AM

Well, Leo. Ya can't really blame us. You've come on here more than once seeming all depressed and whatnot.

Title: Re: Out of Reach, I Chase Her Anyway. <2>
Post by: LeoReborn on November 25, 2010, 01:12:02 AM

Well, that IS Life.

I understand really, but seriously, No spoilers for you.