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Creative Discussions => Fan Fiction & Writing => Topic started by: PowerPoke on February 22, 2011, 04:07:08 AM

Title: Lucario's Poem
Post by: PowerPoke on February 22, 2011, 04:07:08 AM
Lucario is blue!
He is 1000 times better than mewtwo!
He has thorns on his paws!
But he doesn't have any claws!

Lucario is strong!
His instincs are never wrong!
He can sense people's aura!
He is a great explorer!

Lucario is loyal!
To me he is royal!
He has red eyes!
He never tells lies!

That is Lucario!


Title: Re: Lucario's Poem
Post by: PowerPoke on February 22, 2011, 04:07:51 AM
Do you love it?  ;D What could I do to improve it?  :D
Title: Re: Lucario's Poem
Post by: Frenchfry on February 22, 2011, 04:09:51 AM
Lucario's eyes aren't blue.
Title: Re: Lucario's Poem
Post by: PowerPoke on February 22, 2011, 04:14:42 AM
....Your right aswell!...Oh Sugar cheese biscuits!!  :-[ Hang on a second!
Title: Re: Lucario's Poem
Post by: PowerPoke on February 22, 2011, 04:16:44 AM
I think I got confused with the body,  :-\ Sorry about that!  ;D I fail at everything!  :-[ RP/Roleplays, Stories, and now poems... :'(
Title: Re: Lucario's Poem
Post by: Aka-Kami on February 22, 2011, 09:07:19 AM
You're alright, everyone on PU isn't perfect :) We were all noobs before.. well, maybe not everyone. lol.