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« on: March 19, 2014, 06:36:08 PM »
I think this is a good idea. It's always nice to motivate people in the beginning by giving them easy access to good stuff 
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« on: March 19, 2014, 06:34:39 PM »
Alright so this is the corrected version of what you wrote. I also added some of my own stuff (in Italics) because I'm actually quite fond of Smeargle: Pokemon #235, Smeargle, Normal type, Painter pokemonThese pokemon are well known for their natural ability as a painter and their ability to use the move Sketch, which allows them to copy the last move used by other pokemon. Smeargle is a bipedal Pokémon with soft white and brown fur. It has a long tail with an end resembling a paintbrush. Their upper head is shaped like a beret resembling those worn by French artists. It has floppy, brown ears and a brown collar on its neck. The rings encircling Smeargle's eyes are also brown, as are Smeargle’s eyelids. Its arms have two brown bands, and its legs have only one. When they reach maturity, they let its comrade plant its footprint on its back. DietSmeargle is a herbivorous pokemon which feeds on fresh berries and some fruits that grow near caves and water. Habitat Smeargle mainly inhabit caves and the surrounding area, so as not to be disturbed when they paint. Sometimes they are seen close to the big cities, and are naturally drawn towards locations with a great view, as this gives them inspiration for their best paintings.Biology In his tail fluids are produced that allow him to mark his territory. The color of the fluids change with their mood swings. They live in groups and most of the time they live their whole life in the same group. Sometimes groups or Smeargle run rampant while marking entire cities as their territories. In such cases, the city often ends up covered in many layers of paint.Smeargle is a normal type pokemon, that can learn almost any attack by using his Sketch move only after watching another pokemon use it. They are usually peacefull and don't like to fight if it's not necessary. This is why you won't ever find a wild Smeargle that knows any move other than sketch.Smeargle is unique in its ability to learn every move in the Pokemon world by copying it with the move Sketch. Smeargle with all sorts of interesting and powerful movesets can be found all over the world. Some trainers have made it a challenge to have Smeargle learn the most powerful moves usually exclusive to legendary pokemon. Such Smeargle, with for example Aeroblast, Sacred Fire, V-Create and Psycho Boost, are extremely rare and very expensive.Pokemon League Commission notes Despite the difficulty of finding one in the wild, this pokemon has been categorize as a Class D Pokemon under the Endangered Pokemon Act. Under this classification, this pokemon are allowed to be caught in the wild, with no limited quantities. However is forbidden to sell their paintings without autorization from the Pokemon Art Committee. I'm sorry if I took over your post too much. I got carried away a bit with adding information. I have to say, your information was mostly very good! Please keep posting, and if you like I'll keep helping you with your entries like this
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« on: March 19, 2014, 06:17:49 PM »
I worked it in for ya
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« on: March 18, 2014, 08:46:33 PM »
Pokemon #178, Xatu, Psychic/Flying type, Mystic pokemon.
Intro: Xatu is a pokemon that is well-known for its ability to foresee the future. Xatu is a bipedal bird pokemon that conveys an aura of stateliness. It has a conical body with two wings folded across his chest, and a spherical, green head with narrowed eyes, a yellow, hooked beak, and two red ribbons coming from the back of his head. His body is decorated with a green cat-like figure that appears to be hiding behind Xatu’s wings, and has red cat-eyes. Xatu’s wings are white and have red and black stripes at the end. He has a mostly green body with two yellow stripes around his waist. Below his torso are two slim feet, that are red in the middle and white at the tips.
Habitat: Xatu may rarely be found amongst wild populations of Natu. These populations are usually drawn towards places with ancient ruins due to their fascination with said ruins.
Diet: Xatu eats berries, nuts and seeds. It is also able to drain energy from other living beings, but prefers not to use this ability.
Biology: Xatu is a highly intelligent pokemon that is able to learn to communicate with humans using flags. This ability has made it one of the few pokemon that is able to directly communicate with its trainer.
Xatu is able to foresee the future and can look into the past. It is usually silently mortified of the future when it senses impending darkness. It is said in certain regions, that Xatu views the future with its right eye and the past with its left one. As it is very interested in the past, Xatu tends to only gather at locations where a rich history has formed through the eons. Moreover, finding Xatu’s natural habitat in other locations is practically impossible.
Due to its ability to foresee the future, Xatu is very stoic and only moves when absolutely necessary to evade an attack.
Xatu rises slightly before sunrise and may take an entire day meditating in complete silence. When this happens, it’s usually busy clearing its mind from visions of possible dark futures.
Xatu uses its signature move Future Sight to predict an attack that will hit the opponent. No one knows where the attack actually comes from. It is most likely that it is caused by an external force, since KO’ing Xatu will not stop the attack.
Pokemon League Commission notes:
Class B: Xatu is rarely found in the wild. Since their natural migration towards certain locations usually implies the presence of an archaeologically significant location, the centre for Archaeology has requested a restriction towards catching Xatu in historically important locations.
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« on: March 18, 2014, 08:04:40 PM »
Would you like me to help you with the grammar? I can make suggestions for improvements without changing your authentic writing style
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« on: March 18, 2014, 08:01:51 PM »
This is a nice entry, but it still needs some work. Would you like me to help you make an improved version? You provided a lot of good information! Very well inspired, but the text needs some caressing before it can be approved.
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« on: March 18, 2014, 07:58:50 PM »
Another nice entry from you there are some things that could be better: The first and last paragraph of the Biology (about the behavior of domisticated and wild arcanine) basically say the same thing. Could you try to merge these parts and remove any double information? The PLC class is F since it can only evolve with a fire stone  Keep up the good work!
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« on: March 18, 2014, 07:45:12 PM »
I like your overall writing style, but I'd change a few things:
First, I wouldn't say that pollution is the cause of shiny azurill. It makes it sound like shiny azurill are a bad thing and we all know how much everyone loves shiny pokemon :p
Secondly, you make certain sentences slightly too long. The story about azurill eating things that resemble their ball and turn out to be berries is cute, but you could make it a bit shorter.
Finally, I seriously disagree with you making Azurill a Class B pokemon. It's not rare in any way, so Class D will do. honey, I know you love azurill, but there's no reason this should reflect on other people's azurill catching quota :p
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« on: March 18, 2014, 07:37:45 PM »
You seem to have a cute weakness for pokemon and their families amirite? :p Nice entry. I would change some wordings, but it's supposed to be your work, not mine Good job.
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« on: March 18, 2014, 07:34:53 PM »
Couple of typo's here and there. Apart from that, I really don't have anything to add.
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« on: March 18, 2014, 07:30:28 PM »
There are still some things that you can change about the descriptions. How about the blade-like protrusions coming from his elbows? Is that really the only way to describe that?
If you just try to describe what you see, you'll probably experience that it works to just write down what you see. You probably won't be able to write it better than Bulbapedia, but I can't improve that either, since it's written so wel.
If you want some more help with this, tell me, and I'll gladly give some more suggestions!
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« on: March 17, 2014, 09:13:35 PM »
I think my entry is too long, so this is my attempt to post it as an attachment.
*edit* :yup it worked. It's definitely long.
*edit 2*: can anyone tell me what the caracter limit is for posts?
*edit 3*: here's the author's comments. It may even be better to read these before reading the entry. Possibly not though. Mehhh I dunno about all this but here goes:
Author’s Comments: This is it. This is really as far as I’m willing to go with any pokemon. I’m seriously having second thoughts about posting this. Is it really necessary to be wanting to explain things to this detail? I mean what about lava pokemon? How do they retain cellular structure when all proteins denaturate at about 200 °C? And Ice pokemon? What is an ice beam anyways? How does it mess with all the laws of thermodynamics? Instead of answering any of those, I went with the most horrible one of them all: The pokemon made of data. I mean come on, seriously? Something is data and matter at the same time? how the hell does that even work right? Well, the above is my answer to that. Uhm, I really don’t know where I want to go with these comments, but if you really didn’t get any of the above, that’s fine. I don’t get it either. I highly doubt anything ever works like that. It’s fine really, it’s written by the guy who wanted to explain how stuff works in the pokemon world. I thought my entry on Castform was fine too. This one is like that, except it got a bit out of hand. It’s probably fine :p
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« on: March 17, 2014, 08:19:49 PM »
You're welcome I appreciate the feedback. Now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to do something other than bug-types for a bit
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« on: March 17, 2014, 06:47:40 PM »
Pokemon #15, Beedrill, Bug/Poison type, Poison Bee pokemon.
Intro: Beedrill is a pokemon that is known for its aggressive behavior and appearance in swarms. Beedrill is a large bee, whose body consists of three pale yellow segments. The top segment is its head, which is mostly round and slightly pointed at its mouth. It has two round, red eyes and two antenna on top of its head. The middle segment of its body is connected to the arms, legs and wings. The arms end in a large conical stinger, and the feet consist of three segments that are designed to stand on, rather than cling onto surfaces. The wings are colorless and semi-transparent. The legs, arms and antenna are blue-gray. The bottom segment of the body is has black and yellow stripes, and a large yellow stinger protruding from it.
Habitat: Beedrill lives mostly in forested areas, in which it lives in large swarms, and often has its own territory.
Diet: Beedrill mainly eats the berries that grow in the forest. Beedrill may also hunt and eat larvae and pupa of other insects.
Biology: Beedrill is a pokemon that is extremely territorial and protective of its species, and very aggressive towards trespassers and apparent aggressors. It will use its three poison stingers to bring great harm to any target, and is relentless in its pursuit. A large external stimulant is necessary to dissuade a swarm of angry Beedrill.
If it is threatened, large groups of kakuna may evolve prematurely and become Beedrill in order to fight of invaders or take revenge on aggressors.
Beedrill is able to launch its stinger from its abdomen, and this stinger is also the most poisonous of the three stingers. It uses this for moves such as pin missile.
Beedrill's signature move, Twinneedle, is performed using its namesake stingers, and is rare amongst bug-type moves in that it is able to poison an opponent.
Beedrill is a pokemon that is well-loved amongst young trainers, especially Bug-catchers. The ability to train one's Kakuna to level 10 and evolve it into Beedrill is often seen as the first large step in a Bug-catcher's career. Bug-catchers with a Beedrill often become overconfident, and will start challenging random passersby to battles. Due to Beedrill's many weaknesses, in addition to most Bug-catchers' incompetence, this confidence only lasts a short while. Most of them then realise that a varied team is necessary to win more pokemon battles and only the most die-hard bug-fans will stick to their original path.
Pokemon League Commission notes:
Class D: No restrictions have been implemented towards catching Beedrill, since large swarms of Beedrill are known to harass people passing through the woods. However, extreme caution is advised, since attempting to catch a wild Beedrill is likely to anger the entire swarm.
The recommended way of obtaining Beedrill is to catch the docile Weedle or Kakuna, and evolve this.
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« on: March 17, 2014, 06:46:04 PM »
Pokemon #212, Scizor, Bug/Steel type, Pincer pokemon.
Intro: Scizor is the result of Scyther fusing with the metal coat during a trade and going into evolution. Scizor is a human-sized insectoid pokemon that is fully covered in a red metal coating. Its head has lost most features apart from its eyes and the three spikes protruding from the occiput. The chest and abdomen have molded together, with both of them featuring black patches from the neck down and three segments from the waist down. Scyther's blades have been replaced with two-segmented claws, decorated by a yellow and black eye-like mark that give the claws the appearance of separate heads. Scizor still has transparent wings, now jointed to the body with slim metal segments.
Scizor's joints are joined to the body at well-defined places, which are thicker and rounder than the rest of the limb. Scizor's legs consist of small upper legs and thick lower legs that end in a white toe-like claw, with a smaller claw on the other side of the foot for stability.
Habitat: Scizor does not appear as a wild pokemon. The method of evolution is exclusive to Scyther that are traded while holding a metal coat, which is such a complicated method of evolution that it does not happen in the wild.
Diet: Since Scizor does not appear in the wild, its diet is regulated by the trainer. It has a preference for certain berries, and requires a daily intake of certain minerals to maintain its metal coat.
Biology: Since evolution, Scizor has gained a tremendous amount of physical power. It also had to relinquish a lot of mobility and speed, which resulted in a significantly lower base speed.
Scizor is a prime user of the move Bullet Punch, which greatly suits it due to its typing and low base speed. Some Scizor can improve the power of its signature move even further with Swords Dance and the ability Technician, which also powers up other low-powered moves.
The mechanism behind Scyther's evolution is not understood very well. It appears that in case of Scyther, the metal coat covering the body is activated due to the energy of the trade, and the activated metal fuses with Scyther's exterior. The fusion triggers evolution, and the natural mechanism appears to 'take over' and guide the metal to apparently predetermined locations and reforming the scythes into claws, finally turning Scyther into Scizor.
Scizor has the ability to Mega-evolve into Mega-Scizor using Scizorinite. Mega-Scizor's claws become more flattened and have additional teeth, which are also sharper. The lower half of the claws is now white and has three spikes on the bottom. Finally, the yellow dot has turned blue. Mega-Scizor's joints have turned black and have become more pronounced, and an additional black three-pronged feature decorates his face, giving his eyes a more determined look. The spikes on his head are now sharper and more pronounced. Mega-Scizor's legs have lost some detail, and are sharper at the bottom and broader at the top. They look like shields, and a thin leg is visible on the back of the shield, with a spike sticking out to the back.
Pokemon League Commission notes:
Class F: Due to a highly complex evolutionary mechanism, Scizor is only obtainable through the previously described method. A single Scizor, released by its trainer, may roam somewhere, but no PLC guidelines have been implemented for this case.
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