Easy rules, I think of a topic or a word that what you say will revolve around, then you get one post that has something to do with the topic oh and don't do some weird long story, best post wins (I'm judging don't get any ideas lol , I will decide when the posting ends as well)

first topic: Help my pants are on fire!

I suddenly appear above mithos's head and stab him, he falls down and lands on you crushing you

So you need to do a few things.. The first thing would be to go back to the story and elaborate. Right now the story is about as detailed as a blank canvas, which is not such a bad thing, it means you can create MORE to fill the space. Take what you've already written, and add more to it. Details and explanations.. Make vague comments actually understandable by explaining your view and idea.

Then you need to organize what you write. Use paragraphs, make things that you want to be understood more legible. If you just toss a bunch of words together, even if the ideas are great, you'll get little out of it...

Next thing is to use what information, opinions and arguments that have been presented to strengthen your story. Jerry is telling you to make things more reasonable because your statements and outlines were extremely vague and undefined.

If people are going to RP in this world, they need to know their world has limits, rules, boundaries and then they know where they can function and how. You can't just give people nothing to go on, then later turn around and tell them they were wrong when they did something you didn't explain wasn't allowed.


To be a good GM for an RP, you have to know your RP world very well, areas, weather, interactions, environment, etc...

I'm hoping I fixed a lot of that, the environment I hoped to be explained when I actually start the rp, and I suddenly had this 'great' idea to make a strange scene about the birth of the masterball in that world and making it seem like a movie, (IDK whether it's a good idea though)

If you want them to make sense, then none of those make sense. Larvae do not buzz around, nor create tremors, nor can charge with enough speed and power to use Mega Horn.

If a spider (galvantula) a caterpie could, like maybe it could wave it's tail or something

So you mean to say you would want a house build just to gaze and dream about it after making it? That's what you're telling me when you said they only changed it and not ruling it, despite all their immoral efforts to do so. All of them wanted to rule the world once it fitted their ideals, regardless of what they did to reach it.

However way you put it, they are imposing their belief onto people and took actions against any person getting in their way. If that is not a way to demonstrate power and impose their laws, then what is it if not ruling?

they didn't build a house, they changed one, plasma want's to liberate pokemon because he thinks that people don't treat them well, if it was a house, they would have taken away the pets, but they wouldn't have ruled that house after taking away the pets. Galactic would have torn down the house then rebuild it even better so that new people would live in it,

P.S.M.T
Username:Helper08
Character name: Sphinx
Moves: tackle, leer, charge
Scars: the black instead of stopping abruptly, spikes into the light blue
Personality: Sphinx is strong and smart always stopping and thinking about the things he's about to do, he is also nice and depends on his friends in his strategies, he has the opposite of a short temper though when he does get angry his strength grows a lot
Pokemon: Shinx

I'm somewhat confused, I'm assuming that I am a pokemon but lucifer's skeleton is based off a human...

when the world ends

- So, you can have a Caterpie learning Quiver Dance, Bug Buzz, Mega Horn and Earthquake? That's what I was getting to on my first question.

Bug Buzz would make sense, but none of the others, even if it did learn those that would have evolved before it could, just moves that make sense but isn't OP.

And I won't say that 'ruling the world with Pokemon' = 'getting rid of Pokemon'...

oops, that was supposed to be ruling the world without pokemon

And what you you mean by "galactic, magma aqua and plasma didn't want to rule the world". They did! They used powerful Pokemon to make the world the way THEY wanted it to be, even if that meant they had to go against OTHER people/Pokemon and bringing them to the ground.

Exactly, they wanted to change it not rule, Galactic wanted to destroy and create a new world, magma and aqua wanted to either get rid of the sea or land, and expand the sea or land. Plasma wanted to make it so that pokemon couldn't be held captive by trainers. None of these have anything to do with ruling the world

So another words its like before Pokeballs where even invented? O.o

In this world the humans hadn't found the way to create pokeballs until then, this isn't in the same world, if that's what your asking