Rate my team.

[Mr. Fox]

I have been using this team on Pokemon Online for a while now, butI think it is weak. What I woul like is to hear if their are any recommendations to improve it. Here goes:

Salamence: Nature: Jolly;
Ability: Earthquake Spirial;
Moves: Earthquake, Dragon Claw, Stone Edge, and Aerial Ace;
Item: Muscle band.

Gallade: Nature, Jolly;
Ability: Justice Heart;
Moves: Close Combat, Psycho Cut, Leaf Blade, and Rock Slide;
Item: Life orb.

Zoroark: Nature: Hasty;
Ability: Illusion;
Moves: U-Turn, Flamethrower, Night Burst, and Extrasensory;
Item: Expert Band

Chirachiino: Nature: Jolly (starting to see a pattern?);
Ability: Skill Link; Moves: Bullet Seed, Sweet Slap, Thunder Wave, and Retribution;
Item: Life Orb.

Jarooda: Nature: Timid;
Ability: Perversity;
Moves: Leaf Storm, Toxic, Giga Drain, and Hidden Power/Fire.
Item: Life Orb

Shandera: Nature: Timid;
Ability: Shadow Arena;
Moves: Psychic, Shadow Ball, Heat Wave, and Energy Ball;
Item: Balloon
I am a risk taker, that is why I have so many Life orbs, so don't comment on that. Shandera is a good revenge killer, Zoroark is a good... Illusionist, Gallade is my physical sweeper, Jarooda with its ability, is a great specal sweeper, Chirachiino, also a good revenge killer with Retribution, and Salamence is a Perfect Sweeper! If he can kill one PKMN he is set to take down an entire team.
so what do you think? Let me know.
Edit: Hope that it is easier to read.

[PkMn Trainer Black]

Seems pretty strong to me. aren't you abe tutor on that game? if so, i think that you should replace dragon claw with draco meteor, in case you're going against pokemon w/ very high defense (base, EVs, and boosts), unless salamance is suppose to be a physical sweeper. overall, it better than my team,in my opinion.

[Raikt]

Wall o' text powers activate! That really is a pain to read, though. Try formatting it a bit to make it easy to rate. (And to bring prevalent information to the forefront, such as moveset.)

Here's an example:

Pokemon's name (M / F?) @ Item Equipped
Ability:
EVs:
Nature
- Move 1
- Move 2
- Move 3
- Move 4

[JohnnyXtreme]

There's a general topic for team rating/help, I do believe.

[PkMn Trainer Black]

title please?

[JohnnyXtreme]

"Need Team Help" by LucarioX

[Mr. Fox]

ok thx.
This forum is closed.

[UnationConsideration]

ok thx.
This forum is closed.

Lets let the moment last first.

[Mr. Fox]

what is that supposed to mean?