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Author Topic: The Beginning Is The End: The Final Chapter  (Read 4777 times)

Offline Eulogy

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The Beginning Is The End: The Final Chapter
« on: August 16, 2010, 03:18:37 AM »
Just would like to say thank you for all of you who liked my stories, I'm planning on making like a Comedy story (too many serious ones for me too handle lol) but yeah, thanks. This is my favorite one so far sense it explains everything. Have fun!


The Beginning is The End
The Final Chapter


   We landed on the rough ground, but it was actually quite smoothly. The forest was gigantic, as if it would never end. We walked, and we heard someone talking.
   “Wait a minute…” I thought. “This guy looks familiar…” We kept walking through the forest. I knew exactly who it was.
   “Bill!” I yelled. I just blew our cover.
   “Shh! Shut up Jeremy!”
   They started shooting at us. We shot back.
   “Get down, get down!” We hid behind a tree, and then pivoted out and shot, then went behind the tree again. I looked to the left. Everything seemed to go slow-motion. Memories swarmed through my head. I looked to the left, behind Bill, and saw someone run to him.
   “Bill look-” I was cut off by the gunshot. I dropped to my stomach, and shot. I turned around and I saw someone come behind me. More memories flooded my head.

   It was Mid August, we knew it was going to be a rough night. So we had to make the best of this picnic. Well she didn’t know it was going to be a picnic. I was going to surprise her, because we never get out. She stood there with her golden, blonde, straight hair that hung about an inch past her shoulders. Her white, with a bit of tan to her skin. She was around five foot five. Her cerulean colored eyes stared at me in amazement.
   “This is so amazing! How did you do it?”
   “I have my ways baby, now let’s get going.”
   My phone beeped, and it was from my friend Tim. The message said that the storm would hit in about 15 minutes, and there were some horrible people, that were going on a killing frenzy, and no one could stop them. We actually stayed out for about 30 more minutes after that message. The sun was out, fairly hot. We were still at the park, having our own picnic. We fed the blue jays that flew down at us.
      “You’re the best husband in the world.”
      “I know.”
   This is when the worst of it all happened. I knew it wasn’t right to stay out. We should have been safe. It was my own mistake. A storm started to pick up, and we rumors were still going about those bad people were coming. Real bad people. Whoever was in there way, wouldn’t get to see there loved ones again.
      “I see them! Jerem-” We were cut off my a gunshot.
      “Jill let’s go!” We ran to the car and got in. A black Escalade was following us.
      “Jeremy, they’re following us!”
      “I know Jill, stay calm!” We heard a gunshot and it flew from the back window.
      “Oh my go-”
   We were driving at about 50 mph, in a 25 mph speed zone. They kept nudging us with there car. I couldn’t see anything.
   “Jeremy go, go, go!”
      “I’m trying!” The lightning struck down by the car, only inches away. Jill screamed, as I did too. I could barely see, as the water flooded over the car. I could barely see…
   “Jill, I love you… don’t you ever forget that.”
      “I love you too…”  We were driving, and a tree fell. I dodged it, barely missing the back of our car. Lightning was going everywhere. Cop cars were heading our way. They couldn’t see us though. They were probably going 70 mph, trying to get to us. We here a gunshot and our tire blew out. They shot both back tires.
   “Hold on!” Jill was crying, I was too. I had no choice. I slammed on the breaks and they slammed into us. Everything was going slow-motion, and I forgot what had just happened. I saw the people run away. Jill’s head was gushing out bleeding.
   “Jill… please… get up…” I moaned. She turned to me and lipped something to me. It look like it said: “I love you, don’t forget that”
   “I love you to baby…please!” Her face went pale, her eyes wide open. It was done.
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Re: The Beginning Is The End: The Final Chapter
« Reply #1 on: August 16, 2010, 03:36:57 AM »
:'( It's.... So... Sad..... *Run's away and starts crying*


Anyway that was great better then the others and I'm looking foward to your comedy one.
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Re: The Beginning Is The End: The Final Chapter
« Reply #2 on: August 16, 2010, 03:59:59 AM »
Haha thanks =D
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Re: The Beginning Is The End: The Final Chapter
« Reply #3 on: August 16, 2010, 03:09:10 PM »
....Jill...Died....TOT
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Re: The Beginning Is The End: The Final Chapter
« Reply #4 on: August 16, 2010, 09:14:46 PM »
But... what about the guy behind Jeremy? :o

Both Jill and Bill died then? (Sorry, pun intended ;))

It was good :). Questions got answered. I think it's time I wonder that happens next.

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Re: The Beginning Is The End: The Final Chapter
« Reply #5 on: August 16, 2010, 09:21:57 PM »
Lol I ended it like that for people to guess what would happen. =D
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Re: The Beginning Is The End: The Final Chapter
« Reply #6 on: August 16, 2010, 09:30:48 PM »
Quote
The next one will explain ALL of your questions.
I feel cheated

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Re: The Beginning Is The End: The Final Chapter
« Reply #7 on: August 16, 2010, 09:58:55 PM »
Lol how?
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Re: The Beginning Is The End: The Final Chapter
« Reply #8 on: August 16, 2010, 10:17:42 PM »
I still have an unanswered question.
Who is Bill?

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Re: The Beginning Is The End: The Final Chapter
« Reply #9 on: August 16, 2010, 10:19:45 PM »
Read the 1st one =D
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