[Pending] Pokemon Haven

[duotent]

THE STORY SO FAR
In the world of pokemon their are to kinds of pokemon: the normal pokemon and, what the human people who try and catch us, pokemon call shiny pokemon or differently coloured pokemon. A Milotic decided against being the one who was battled mostly because of its colours. After finding out about other shiny pokemon, the Milotic left its home and came to a cave where it sent out a message to all shiny pokemon stating the following:
"Dear shiny pokemon, I am a shiny Milotic who is sick of being attacked by humans because of my colours. I am calling all other shiny pokemon to help me build a colony of shiny pokemon. We will protect each other from humans and grow our land. Please come join me at the beach near the human settlement of Slateport City. I've driven everyone of the beach so come.
Yours truly
Siran The Shiny Milotic"

EDIT by mod: Added punctuation and corrected typos.

[duotent]

a map is a here
http://www.photoshop.com/accounts/3b5018449ec04b858c7d36fa6c5e5a6f/px-assets/f4f6d32ff36b4272a33e22470ae81f39

and rules
NO GODMODING YOU ARE NOT ALL POWERFUL
MUST START WITH LEVEL 5 MOVES
NO LEGENDARIES(YET)
NO EVOLVED FORMS UNLESS YOUR ALLOWED BY OWNER
2 TM/HM MOVES ONLY
NO JOB SWITCHING UNLESS CURRENT MAYOR/LEADER OF TRIBE/GROUP WHATEVER ALLOWS
NO POKEMON SWITCHS UNLESS OWNER ALLOWS
ALL JOINING INFO MUST BE PMED TO ME/OWNER
THE MAYOR/LEADER MUST BE CHOSEN BY EVERYONE

[LeoReborn]

Read Global RP Rules, Then add it in.

Also, talk like this.

NAWT LIK DISH!!!
ohra liaek tis.

Like this.

[Aka-Kami]

And can I suggest if you use more punctuation, It's getting hard to understand your writing.

[Jerry]

Your rules are not clear at all...

1. "NO EVOLVED FORMS UNLESS YOUR ALLOWED BY OWNER"

I think it's unfair that you are the only evolved pokemon... don't you think so?

2. "OWNER"

What are you referring to by saying 'owner'? I thought that the shiny pokemon here will be free

And please, learn to type properly in your posts.

[duotent]

Jerry um i meant no starting as a evolved one
unbreakable where do i write like that im australian thats how we talk

[Jerry]

Well, you didn't answer... what I meant was that you started as an evolved pokemon. So, why should others not pick evolved pokemon too?

I have a couple of aussie friends, and they DON'T write like this at all.

[Sora]

I think he ment 'owner of the RP', by this, the creator of the RP, or himself.
But I have to admit, not allowing others have evolved forms, and you haveing one is a bit unfair...

[LeoReborn]

Not to mention, Duotent isnt active enough to do this.

He would have responded by now if it werent the case.

My Solution: Wait.
Detailed Solution: On 1 month of this RP (meaning: After its been on for one Month) I will lock this.

If Duotent still fails to respond after a week, deletion.

If you have an RP, be active enough to maintain it.

[Aka-Kami]

Dude, I'm australian, your writing has got nothing to do with being aussie.

[LeoReborn]

Actually, Because of this incident, I Added a new Rule, Check it out.