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These Streets Pt3 (Finished)
« on: September 04, 2010, 03:55:34 AM »
Finally had some more time to finish. Again, tell me when you want me to stop, I could go on for ever :P

The the top of the sun edged it's way over the buildings lining the alleyway; illuminating a half finished slogan scrawled in red paint.
'The Nazis are back and...'
It had been crudely executed and long fingers of crimson snaked their way to the ground where they mixed with splatters of blood.

Three hooded figures huddled around a body sprawled in the middle of one of the many dark pools.

"You think he's alive?" A slightly shocked voice broke the silence.

Pain seared through his head as if somebody was slowly driving nails into his skull.

"No chance. Look at all that blood." It was uttered animalistically, almost a growl.

Through the mists of pain he became dimly aware of something more.

"I dunno mate, I think he's breathing."

Hard. It was hard. That was what he could feel.

"You know what? I don't think that blood's his." A third voice broke into the conversation.

He could now make out thin individual stones digging into his back and neck.

"Sh!t. I'd hate to see the other guy"

Gritting his teeth with effort, the boy let out a low moan.

"All right, let's get him somewhere sheltered"

A bright light pierced his eyelids. Everything hurt, but it seemed to spread from his forehead, like a bullseye on a dartboard. But slowly, the agony began to subside; he felt a soothing, cooling sensation begin at the epicentre of his pain. Experimentally, he clenched a fist.
His fingers burned, but it wasn't unbearable. Feeling more confident, he moved his other arm; again, it wasn't exactly a great feeling but he could handle it. Satisfied that he wasn't about to die any time soon, he cast his mind back to the alley.
He remembered the sheer terror as the fist came hurtling towards him.
The way he raised his right arm up in self defence.

'Oh God, oh God.' He began to whisper as the realisation began to dawn on him.
'No, please, no.'

'Don't worry mate, you'll be fine.' Reassured one of the speakers from his dreams.
'Badger! He's waking up!'
« Last Edit: September 09, 2010, 11:10:53 PM by Declan_23 »

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Re: These Streets Pt3 (Teaser)
« Reply #1 on: September 04, 2010, 09:27:05 AM »
Okay, seems like you intentionally skipped a part from the 'story'. I'll be looking forward for the next part :)
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Re: These Streets Pt3 (Finished)
« Reply #2 on: September 09, 2010, 11:11:50 PM »
Finally managed to finish part 3.
May write part 4 over the weekend depending on how much school work I get :/

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Re: These Streets Pt3 (Finished)
« Reply #3 on: September 13, 2010, 06:28:49 PM »

Alright, I'm a little lost, I'll admit it... I have no idea where it's going from here.

Nice work. I'm hoping you'll have time to work on the next part soon.

I do hate forums for these though... Well, no. I just hate waiting for the next part of a story. =p

Ooh! I know!!

Give me some of your homework and I'll do it so you can work on this! Haha!

... ... ... Shh ... ... ... The walls have feet ... ... ...