Life in the Sinnoh waters

[Wailord]

The Sinnoh Region is a beautiful place. I hopped out of bed, waving to my mum grabbing my mask and wet suit. It was very early in the morning and the sun had not yet risen. A light shadow covered the surface of the Sinnoh region and I could only just catch a glimpse of the wind turbines on the Valley Windworks rotating sleepily as if they had also just woken up also.

I flew to the Snow point city harbour where I met up with Shawn my scuba instructor with the help of my Pidgeotto. I stroke his head before returning him into his Pokeball. Shawn and me hopped upon our motorboat and checked our scuba equipment.

 "Everyone check your pressure gauges." Shawn bellowed. "Its going to be 66 ft down there equivalent to 3 Bars of Atmosphere pressure." 

Shawn had been my scuba instructor for the last 3 years but the best part was being under the water was that we wouldn't have to hear his voice. He sounded more like an Exploud than anything else.

 "Flippers on mate." and at that we made our way to the edge of the "Manaphy."

It was a small but sturdy boat. Rather like the Pokemon; tiny yet full of life.

We sat on the edge just as the sun was bleeding over the Horizon. This was when the the Wailmer came out to play. Shawn and me grinned with excitement for the last time before plunging backwards into the water. We felt the icy cold water of the sea engulf our bodies pumping full of adrenaline. We controlled our breathing and released air from our jackets using our BCD's. It was at that moment that we started downwards. We were in paradise.

Shoals of Remoraid were scouring the ocean floor searching for microscopic Pokemon to feed on, Octillery speeding across coral and Enenimies migrating south towards Kanto. Not to mention Clampearl resting among the rocks as we caught glimpse of their beautiful pearls shining gloriously against the early morning sun. Shawn and me looked at each other, knowing very well what we were both thinking. We MUST get closer.

We sped downwards equalizing to release the pressure out of our ears. Our flippers touched the Ocean floor, and we looked upwards. It was a magical sight never to be forgotten. The light was bouncing off the ocean surface. A magnificent Wailord glided overhead blocking out the sun. It was like an eclipse.

Many Huntail and Gorebyss hugged along side this mammoth of a whale Pokemon, with Relicanth grooming the giant eating the barnacles and old Clampearl shells covering its stomach and tail.  We then came across a sanctuary of Carvannah playing with the Mantyke, their faces matching the pattern on their backs. You could tell that they were truly having a great time. Mantine and Sharpedo surveyed the area protecting their young from suspected predators in the area. Although not many, as mothers, they are known to be extremely cautious, especially Sharpedo.

Their eyes dug into you like the sharpest of knives. It was a completely nervous feeling when staring into their eyes. So we moved on.  We ran into a few Magikarp nervously dotting around, waiting for the glorious feeling of evolution into the legendary Gyarados. Several Squirtle swam around the Magikarp taunting them, Magikarp staring back waiting for their revenge. Although they were extremely agitated we could not help but laugh a little.

Shawn took out his air regulator and began to blow water rings. Horsea immediately surrounded them and started swimming through them playing and breaking them up. It was a glorious sight.  It was to the sea that I felt I belonged. On returning to the surface I came up with the most amazing feeling. Out of all dives I had ever been on in the Sinnoh region. This had been the most magical and one I would never forget. I could only wonder how my friends in the Kanto, Unova, Johto and Hoenn region were doing. I hope it is soon that they will write to me telling me of their experiences.

[Jerry]

It was quite good, but some suggestions:

You can re-read your piece of writing to remove the scattered errors here and there.
You can separate your paragraphs to make it easier for your readers to read.

[Wailord]

It was quite good, but some suggestions:

You can re-read your piece of writing to remove the scattered errors here and there.
You can separate your paragraphs to make it easier for your readers to read.

Done! 

Sorry for the inconvenience
Cheers

[Jerry]

Okay, with some edits::

The Sinnoh Region is a beautiful place. I hopped out of bed, waving to my mum grabbing my mask and wet suit. It was very early in the morning and the sun had not yet risen. A light shadow covered the surface of the Sinnoh region and I could only just catch a glimpse of the wind turbines on the Valley Windworks rotating sleepily as if they had also just woken up also.

I flew to the Snow point city harbour where I met up with Shawn my scuba instructor with the help of my Pidgeotto. I stroke his head before returning him into his Pokeball. Shawn and me hopped upon our motorboat and checked our scuba equipment.

 "Everyone check your pressure gauges." Shawn bellowed. "Its going to be 66 ft down there equivalent to 3 Bars of Atmosphere pressure." 

Shawn had been my scuba instructor for the last 3 years but the best part was being under the water was that we wouldn't have to hear his voice. He sounded more like an Exploud than anything else.

 "Flippers on mate." and at that we made our way to the edge of the "Manaphy."

It was a small but sturdy boat. Rather like the Pokemon; tiny yet full of life.

We sat on the edge just as the sun was bleeding over the Horizon. This was when the the Wailmer came out to play. Shawn and me grinned with excitement for the last time before plunging backwards into the water. We felt the icy cold water of the sea engulf our bodies pumping full of adrenaline. We controlled our breathing and released air from our jackets using our BCD's. It was at that moment that we started downwards. We were in paradise.

Shoals of Remoraid were scouring the ocean floor searching for microscopic Pokemon to feed on, Octillery speeding across coral and Enenimies migrating south towards Kanto. Not to mention Clampearl resting among the rocks as we caught glimpse of their beautiful pearls shining gloriously against the early morning sun. Shawn and me looked at each other, knowing very well what we were both thinking. We MUST get closer.

We sped downwards equalizing to release the pressure out of our ears. Our flippers touched the Ocean floor, and we looked upwards. It was a magical sight never to be forgotten. The light was bouncing off the ocean surface. A magnificent Wailord glided overhead blocking out the sun. It was like an eclipse.

Many Huntail and Gorebyss hugged along side this mammoth of a whale Pokemon, with Relicanth grooming the giant eating the barnacles and old Clampearl shells covering its stomach and tail.  We then came across a sanctuary of Carvannah playing with the Mantyke, their faces matching the pattern on their backs. You could tell that they were truly having a great time. Mantine and Sharpedo surveyed the area protecting their young from suspected predators in the area. Although not many, as mothers, they are known to be extremely cautious, especially Sharpedo.

Their eyes dug into you like the sharpest of knives. It was a completely nervous feeling when staring into their eyes. So we moved on.  We ran into a few Magikarp nervously dotting around, waiting for the glorious feeling of evolution into the legendary Gyarados. Several Squirtle swam around the Magikarp taunting them, Magikarp staring back waiting for their revenge. Although they were extremely agitated we could not help but laugh a little.

Shawn took out his air regulator and began to blow water rings. Horsea immediately surrounded them and started swimming through them playing and breaking them up. It was a glorious sight.  It was to the sea that I felt I belonged. On returning to the surface I came up with the most amazing feeling. Out of all dives I had ever been on in the Sinnoh region. This had been the most magical and one I would never forget. I could only wonder how my friends in the Kanto, Unova, Johto and Hoenn region were doing. I hope it is soon that they will write to me telling me of their experiences.