[Quest] Protecting happiness

[zylonnick]

This quest can be situated in any village with a forest nearby.
The quest starts by talking to an NPC in the village.

"I heard some rumors about team ‘?’ (The name of the team PU is gonna make) trying to evolve a riolu by force in their secret lab. They want to use him for their evil plans. It is horrible what they are trying to do to that poor riolu, because normally, it only evolves if it's raised by a loving trainer. This will corrupt the poor thing. I beg you to help him."

>"Of course I will help him but I don't know where to find this secret lab."
>"Maybe later."

The red line lets you postpone the quest (obviously).
If you choose the green line, he'll say:

"They apparently have a secret lab in the forest north from here, but beware, it's well hidden and probably guarded too. Now go help the riolu."

You'll go to the forest, and after some searching you will find a hidden entrance. When you enter the underground lab, you will find two guards. You will have to fight them at the same time (a double battle). They have relative easy pokémon to beat.
 When you win, you can proceed, but one of the guards leaves saying:
"I'll inform the boss. Block the exit untill I'm back."
The other one will block the door saying:
Just wait until the boss hears about this.

Then you go deeper into the underground building where you'll find a professor starting up his machines to evolve the riolu.

"What? How did you pass the guards? Never mind, I'll beat you myself"
You fight him (his pokémon are tougher than the guards, but not too tough). When you win, the boss enters.

“How dare you humiliate my team! I’ll make you pay for this insult!”
Now you have to fight him. His pokémon are (of course) tougher then the ones you fought before.

When you win, the boss says:
“This isn't over yet. I promise you that. One day we’ll meet again and then we will be victorious! Team ‘?’, let’s leave.”

 You take the riolu back to the NPC. He says:
“Thank god you saved him! I was getting a little worried what took you so long. Apperantly, this riolu is quite fond of you now. He wants to stay with you. You can have it if you want.”

>"Yes, I’ll take him."
>"Maybe later."

If you choose the green line, he’ll give you the riolu but your party is full, he'll say:
  “Oh dear,  you already have 6 pokémon in your party. I’ll watch over this one for now. Come back later if you have room for him.”

When you choose the red line (who does that, seriously), He’ll say:
  “I’ll watch over this one for now. You can come back for him any time.”

Comment: If you lose in the middle of the quest, you’ll have to restart it with no exp gain.

Comments are appreciated.

(Edited)

[shadowbt]

I like it, but it needs some dialog and maybe some more details. After you defeat the boss maybe you should return with the riolu to the npc in the village or the npc meets you where you beat the boss.I mean if he gave you the quest i think you should meet with him again and then he might say that the riolu wants to go with you because you saved it.

[zylonnick]

I like it, but it needs some dialog and maybe some more details. After you defeat the boss maybe you should return with the riolu to the npc in the village or the npc meets you where you beat the boss.I mean if he gave you the quest i think you should meet with him again and then he might say that the riolu wants to go with you because you saved it.

Done. Any feedback is appreciated.

[Jerry]

I like it too, that should be okay for implementation.

There's nothing outstanding, but you can still derive some more quests out of it

[zylonnick]

I like it too, that should be okay for implementation.

There's nothing outstanding, but you can still derive some more quests out of it

It was the intention that there could be more quests with team '?' linked to this one. Now let's wait 'till someone else (maybe from the PU team?) evaluates it/gives me feedback.

[Declan_23]

I like it, the only issue is, it's extremely similar to one I wrote myself :p
Leave it for now, and I'll see if I can work round it at a later date.

[FireDarkGuy]

Nothing to say. I think that's a very good work.

[zylonnick]

I like it, the only issue is, it's extremely similar to one I wrote myself :p
Leave it for now, and I'll see if I can work round it at a later date.

I didn't know that. I have only been commenting at quests since yesterday and haven't looked at older work. Could you give me the link, maybe I'll edit mine later then.

[Declan_23]

I like it, the only issue is, it's extremely similar to one I wrote myself :p
Leave it for now, and I'll see if I can work round it at a later date.

I didn't know that. I have only been commenting at quests since yesterday and haven't looked at older work. Could you give me the link, maybe I'll edit mine later then.

It's top secret, so no
The quests that I write stay for the game are not published on the website.

[zylonnick]

I like it, the only issue is, it's extremely similar to one I wrote myself :p
Leave it for now, and I'll see if I can work round it at a later date.

I didn't know that. I have only been commenting at quests since yesterday and haven't looked at older work. Could you give me the link, maybe I'll edit mine later then.

It's top secret, so no
The quests that I write stay for the game are not published on the website.

Oh, I forgot about that, sorry for asking.