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Offline Ice Warrior Astral

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My first poem
« on: September 02, 2011, 11:06:38 PM »
                                             Stand Up and Be True.
                                      When I battle,I use what I have,
                                       But there are those who pick on me,
                                       They use Pokemon that have different abilities,
                                       That over power me and told me to use them,
                                        But I stand up and be true to myself.

                                       I tell myself they don't know the true power,
                                       They don't see what good or somewhat decent,
                                       I don't follow their advice I follow what is true,
                                       I see the potentals that of the never used,
                                       So they can stand up and be true.

                                       If the trainers that are blinded by winning can see,
                                       That every single Pokemon has what it takes,
                                       And let what they see is good,
                                       Not judging by ablities,stats or natures,
                                       So we can all stand up and be true to ourselves.







Hope this poem got through to everybody and hope you all like it.The reason why I came up with this poem is because I seen and battled with people who use certain abilities or moves that I tried to counteract with what I have got and failed.I use Pokemon that have some potentals and try to win with them.When I lose somtimes I feel that some people don't deserve to win.A few who win are those who use what is good to them.


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Re: My first poem
« Reply #1 on: September 03, 2011, 12:25:49 AM »
corny, but don't worry i think all poems are corny  8) i'm not a literature guy but if i was good crap  :P



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Re: My first poem
« Reply #2 on: September 03, 2011, 01:28:49 PM »
I agree with the message of the poem, however I am unable to determine the beat.
I would say this is a good start for a poet, keep it up, expect good things from you in the future mate

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Re: My first poem
« Reply #3 on: September 03, 2011, 03:38:05 PM »
I agree with the message of the poem, however I am unable to determine the beat.
I would say this is a good start for a poet, keep it up, expect good things from you in the future mate

 No need for a beat/rhyme/pattern in a free verse :)
 Not bad for a start though.
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Re: My first poem
« Reply #4 on: September 03, 2011, 08:32:51 PM »
And sort of goes well with the job the balance team is trying to put up :)
No one can go back and change a bad beginning; but anyone can start now and create a successful ending.
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