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Offline repo222

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World War Z: X pt1
« on: September 11, 2011, 09:56:43 AM »
 In the not to distant future, many people will die of a desease that infects the living and brings back the dead. This desease, or virus, will make anyone whos infected, a mindless zombie. This is the year 2056.
 Back in 2026, the government formed a new organization named Zeneco. Zeneco was supposed to be the future of the new world. Eventually, Max Dweller, the owner, created a syrum that could bring back the dead.
 He went to graveyard right next to the Zeneco building. He then injected a body with the syrum.
 About a minute after the injection, the corpse was still dead. He had lost all hope and was about to leave, when he heard a loud moan.
 He turned around and saw the corpse reaching for him. It raced hostilly to Max. Max ordered his men to shoot. They hesitated until one of them got bit.
 The guards fired rapidly at the corpse, ripping his arms and legs off. "You damn zombie scum!" He said. He and his men walked off.
 But from behind, the corpse started to chases them again, but faster this time.... Max turned around, heart beating the fastest it had ever beaten before. "H..hh.. How can he not die?!?! He just shot the hell out of him!!" He zombie groaned and reached for Max.
 Max quickly grabbed one of his guards' gun and blasted the zombie's brain. The zombie fell on the ground instantly, and as cold as ice.
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Re: World War Z: X pt1
« Reply #1 on: September 11, 2011, 04:45:46 PM »
Not bad, but couldn't hurt to be longer.
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Re: World War Z: X pt1
« Reply #2 on: September 12, 2011, 10:45:49 AM »
Amazing.
Make it into an RP.
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Re: World War Z: X pt1
« Reply #3 on: September 12, 2011, 07:09:16 PM »
wierd... sounds like a good RP.
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Re: World War Z: X pt1
« Reply #4 on: September 12, 2011, 07:56:25 PM »
Yes, too bad you already moved to do exactly that ::)
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Re: World War Z: X pt1
« Reply #5 on: September 12, 2011, 08:16:58 PM »
nope I have been thinking about this for quite some time. I have 227 pages to go through to find it, when I do I will post it.
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Re: World War Z: X pt1
« Reply #6 on: September 14, 2011, 01:50:50 AM »
make an rp of it?
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Re: World War Z: X pt1
« Reply #7 on: September 14, 2011, 11:35:12 AM »
Probably not, no.
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Re: World War Z: X pt1
« Reply #8 on: September 14, 2011, 05:01:35 PM »
 Sounds like a lot of the junk that's been circulating on the net... I do commend you for trying, but unless you can show something new with zombies, it won't really be interesting. If it sounds a bit harsh I'm sorry, it's my way of saying "Let me see more." :)
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