The Broken wind Mill

[tomgregory200]

while walking along as path you come arcoss a wind mill with a guy out side,

you talk to him

The  man says

'Some guys took parts from my wind mill and i need them back, hold on thats my phone, it says if you want your parts back you will have to follow my clues,

1) look in a place where the sun is hot and the ground has turned to dust

you go to the desert find a item and return the item,

he says heres the next clue,

2) in the place where all must start

you go to where all new members load on to PU

and find the item and turn the item to the guy,

he says thats great only two more to go

3) climb to the highest point in PU

find the part and return
 thats great last clue

4) im the guy who took the parts im in (-----) town come fine me.

you look for the guy and find him now you have to battle him to get the last part

however if you lose you have to start again

if you win you go back to the wind mill and give the guy the last  part, he then ask for help putting all the parts together, it opens up a slide puzzle like in gold and sliver,

once you have done that you have completed  the broken mill quest,

now you could extend this with more parts to find but with out knowing what is in the game i had to make things up

[Jerry]

One thing bugs me though... why would someone take the parts of the windmill and give clues of where they are to the owner?

Is that person someone who craves to make puzzles for people?

[akyoe234]

One thing bugs me though... why would someone take the parts of the windmill and give clues of where they are to the owner?

Is that person someone who craves to make puzzles for people?

Good point

[Declan_23]

Okaay, what I'm noticing is a serious lack of detail.
Why were the parts stolen?
Also, you may want to rethink the location of the parts, it seems like the parts are really far apart, if this is a beginning or easy quest then they should be closer together.
Finally, how do you find these parts? are they just lying around or do you have to search for them? Will they be visible for people not doing the quest?

[BuzzKillington]

My advice would be to one give reasons for why the parts were stolen - an angry oponent wind mill operator or something.
Then instead of having the clues i would have your character find the guy who steals the parts and he has the same amount of pokemon as parts stolen.
You challenge him defeat one of his p
Pokemon and the man runs dropping a part. You catch up to him in a breathless state and he turns to fight you again, you ko one pokemon and he drops a part and runs until you have all the parts and he is defeated.
You take the man and the parts back to the owner he apologizes and in the way of pokemon everything is back to normal!
Just a suggestion though
- Buzz -