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Re: Shards
« Reply #15 on: August 11, 2010, 05:37:39 PM »
Great story! I hope you write more of them!
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Re: Shards
« Reply #16 on: August 11, 2010, 05:46:33 PM »
Quote from: St. Jimmy on August 11, 2010, 05:37:39 PM
Great story! I hope you write more of them!

Thanks, I will try to write another soon.

Quote from: xhizor8201 on August 11, 2010, 05:31:44 PM
Wow, that story really got to me. You both must gone through a lot during that time.

You are aware, only part of it actually happened...

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Quote from: Drbg11 on August 11, 2010, 03:35:38 AM
Erhm thats messed up. What part happend?

Well, He was well known throughout The entire Area, a Football Star, and one night he was driving, started texting, and...yeah.. There were pics of his car, after the wreck, there wasn't really anything left of it, just Scraps of twisted Metal, Tires... I didn't even wanna know what he looked like coming out of it. I was close to his girlfriend, and she Cried, and was depressed for so long, shes still alive, and talks about him. ...Thats all that actually happened.

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Re: Shards
« Reply #17 on: August 11, 2010, 05:47:42 PM »
Yes i am aware, but its still a good story.
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Re: Shards
« Reply #18 on: August 11, 2010, 08:31:14 PM »
That's pretty deep.
*Slits wrists*
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Re: Shards
« Reply #19 on: August 11, 2010, 08:32:19 PM »
That was some srs emo crap going on Declan.
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Re: Shards
« Reply #20 on: August 11, 2010, 09:27:53 PM »
It was a moving story. I'm sorry to hear what happened at your school. On the fiction part, it's a good story, but in reality, NEVER use the phone while driving.

I'm only slightly confused on one point. When she left the message in your locker, she left the two pieces of shard? Because you then leave one piece with her corpse, and you fused the onther one into a ring... I initially thought that Kara kept one of the shards ???
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Re: Shards
« Reply #21 on: August 11, 2010, 09:44:18 PM »
Quote from: Jerry on August 11, 2010, 09:27:53 PM
It was a moving story. I'm sorry to hear what happened at your school. On the fiction part, it's a good story, but in reality, NEVER EVER!!!! use the phone while driving.

I'm only slightly confused on one point. When she left the message in your locker, she left the two pieces of shard? Because you then leave one piece with her corpse, and you fused the onther one into a ring... I initially thought that Kara kept one of the shards ???

I edited, because I wasnt clear on that, She gave me a shard, after the crash. Then the other one with the note.
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Re: Shards
« Reply #22 on: August 12, 2010, 01:30:58 AM »
I liked this a lot. It's nice that he gave Kara a shard, because that shows that he really cared about her. It's sad, but the story is geat nonetheless. :)
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Re: Shards
« Reply #23 on: August 12, 2010, 08:05:00 PM »
Quote from: Unbreakable on August 11, 2010, 09:44:18 PM
Quote from: Jerry on August 11, 2010, 09:27:53 PM
It was a moving story. I'm sorry to hear what happened at your school. On the fiction part, it's a good story, but in reality, NEVER EVER!!!! use the phone while driving.

I'm only slightly confused on one point. When she left the message in your locker, she left the two pieces of shard? Because you then leave one piece with her corpse, and you fused the onther one into a ring... I initially thought that Kara kept one of the shards ???

I edited, because I wasnt clear on that, She gave me a shard, after the crash. Then the other one with the note.

Better! Thanks! :)
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Re: Shards
« Reply #24 on: August 12, 2010, 08:16:31 PM »
Now you get to read Pt II, and soon Pt III.
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Re: Shards
« Reply #25 on: August 12, 2010, 08:17:37 PM »
Heck you can even write a book :D
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Re: Shards
« Reply #26 on: August 12, 2010, 08:26:22 PM »
Yes, reading Part II right now.
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Re: Shards
« Reply #27 on: August 12, 2010, 08:28:46 PM »
Quote from: Drbg11 on August 12, 2010, 08:17:37 PM
Heck you can even write a book :D

That's why Im looking for a Manga Artist, I think it would look awesome.
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Re: Shards
« Reply #28 on: August 12, 2010, 08:30:06 PM »
Im not sure you can write a MANGA about it. It would get boring eventually.
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Re: Shards
« Reply #29 on: August 12, 2010, 08:36:12 PM »
It definately wouldn't be a Long Manga, maybe a Short one, I wanted it for the visual aspect of it.
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