[Ranger_1_Quest] Absol's Sorrow (In_Progress)

[shadowbt]

Location:Town,forest
Requirements: Disabled capture styler,which you get from this quest: http://pokemon-universe.com/index.php/topic,3036.0.html

You will start off in a town.Enter the fancy, big looking house.Inside you will find officer Jenny standing next to a women who is crying and staring at a portrait of a man(the room has some pokemon eggs in the corners and they are in cases).She says:
Ma'am when was the last time you saw him?
My husband left for work two days ago and last thing I told him was don't forget your lunch box.Thats the last time I saw him.(She says in a teary sad voice.)
I see, and did he seem nervous or unusual in any way before he left for work?(she writes this down in her note pad.)
No not at all.Well he seemed a little nervous, but he is the president of a big company that makes pokeballs,he must be going through a lot of stress from all the hard work.I even took a break from caring for all these eggs, as it's my job as a pokemon egg caretaker,and called his company to see if he was there.They said that he just left for home, but he didn't return.
I see, (she continues writing stuff down in her notepad.) and do you know of any enemies or rivals that your husband has?
None that I know of, he only talks to me about his work and about technology advancements in pokeballs.He told me once that he is creating a pokeball that can do things that I could never imagine, but lately his business hasn't been doing so well because of the other competing pokeball companies.
Hmm, ok one second until I right all of this down.
Now while Jenny is finishing up writing this down you go talk to the crying woman.
> What happened to your husband?
> Where is your husband?
For both options, she answers:
I don't know where he is or what has happened to him but he hasn't returned home or called me.Please leave me alone I don't want to talk about this especially when my husband's friend and partner, Absol, is sleeping upstairs.If he awakens again without finding my husband here, I don't know what it might do.
> Please give me a chance to help you find your husband.
> I can try to help you.
I don't know if that would be such a good idea.(officer Jenny cuts in)
Ok, i have finished the report.Do you young trainer want to help me find her husband?Well I don't think you are suited to, wait.Is that a capture styler you have?Are you a pokemon Ranger?
> No,but this was given to me by a ranger.
Yes, I am a ranger.
If you say the 2nd option, she will say that you look nothing like a pokemon ranger.if you say the first:
If a ranger trusts you enough to give you a styler, you must be a tough trainer.Alright then, I will let you help me find this missing person.I think we should start off by questioning the president's workers and his vice president, at his pokeball production building to the north of here.
Thank you Officer Jenny and (YourName).Now please go, go find my husband.
As soon as you and Jenny are about to exit, Absol jumps down the staircase with anger in it's eyes.(not actual fire)
Absol, were you lessoning to everything that was just said?
Absol roars and officer Jenny backs away from the doorway.Absol runs out quickly.
Officer Jenny please bring back our Absol also.Its the last thing I have left of my husband.
Don't worry Ma'am; me and this trainer will get your small family back together again.
Officer Jenny steps out and you follow.
Now that Absol has run away, we have two problems to tend to.You search the north side of town and the Pokeball Co.,where he worked, for information while I search the south side of town for Absol.

You go to the north and straight in to the pokeball Co.(where the woman's husband worked) Inside, there will be 4 floors (It's a company where they make pokeballs, it has to be big)and there will be three workers on each floor. To get information from them, you have to battle them. On the first three floors there will be at least one worker who says he didn't know the president very well and refuses to battle you.That leaves two trainers on each of the first three floors.Each will tell you something worthless like he was a smart guy or good leader.

1st worker has a Hondoom and Umbreon.2nd has a Dragonair and Seadra.On to the second floor, the 3rd worker has a Cumbusken and Breloom.He will tell you that the president gave him a raise for productivity.4th worker has a Piloswine and Seviper.He will tell you that the boss gave him special treatment because his wife is sick.On to the 3rd floor.The 5th worker has a meditite and a Wooper.He will tell you that the boss never over worked him and treated him like family.6th worker has a Espion and Wobbuffet.He will tells you that the boss stayed in his office most of the time.On to the last floor.The 7th worker has a Sandslash and Graveler.He tells you that the boss was a caring man that was always interested in his worker's home lives.The 8th worker has a Marshstomp and Numel.He tells you that the president taught him everything he knows about making pokeballs.On to the vice president.When you walk up to him, you ask him what he knew about the disappearance of the president:
> What happened to your president?
> What do you know about the whereabouts of your president?
 If you want to find out what I know, you have to battle me.
He has a Ninetails and Quilava.
You have defeated me.Very well, I will tell you what I know.The president was testing this new kind of pokeball caled the Telepathy Ball, that could cause the owner to speak with the pokemon inside it and understand it when it speaks back using telepathy.You probably don't know this, but our company isn't doing so well with competing against all these other pokeball making companies across the region, so our president thought that this kind of pokeball would attract trainers to buy from us. He told me that he thought that someone was watching him lately, so he decided to take the few Telepathy Balls that he had created with him.He left with them that same day he went missing,because he was afraid that someone would steal them.Thats all I know and if you are trying to find him, good luck.
You climb down the stairs and exit the building.As soon as you exit the building, a ranger calls you on your capture styler.
Hello again trainer, I'm calling you because it says here that your styler's position is in (The Town your in) and that is near the place where a problem has just ac-cured.A ranger in your area has just informed me that some wild pokemon, along with a young trainer's pokemon have been stolen in the forest west of the town your in.Could you meet him west     of(TheTownYourIn) and help him with this problem?
> I'm sorry, but im in the middle of something.
> Im kind of busy right now.
For either option, he says:
Of course you will because that's why you're such a responsible young trainer.Now hurry and meet the ranger, there is no time to waist.
  Now that you are forced in to that, you have to be responsible and go west of town, and in to the forest.The ranger from that area will be standing there with a young boy.Walk up near him and he will say:
You must be the trainer with a styler that I was told is going to help me.Now I was informed from the boy standing next to me that he saw a couple of shady looking men, carrying nets, raking up all the forest pokemon that they could get their hands on.Along with the forest pokemon, his Pichu got caught in one of the nets and they carried them west of here.
The young boy speaks:
I hid behind a bush until those bad men left and when i couldn't find Officer Jenny, I came to this ranger for help.Will you please help me find my little Pichu?
> Sure, I'd be happy to help.
> Maybe later.

  If you say the 2nd option, then the ranger and boy will stay there until you decide to continue with the quest,and they won't let you go past them to the forest until you say 1st option.

Really,you will? Thank you!
Now (NameOfBoy) I want you to stay here while me and this trainer find your Pichu.Those people could be dangerous so stay alert.
As soon as thats done, the boy stays behind while the ranger follows you. When you head just a little more west of there, you see Absol ahead of you.It starts running away farther to the west and then officer Jenny comes from the north and runs to where Absol was standing.You and the ranger run over to her.
Trainer where have you been?I found Absol in the southern area of town and chased it to this forest.Its looking for its master so we should follow it and it might lead us straight to where (name of lady's husband) is.Wait who is this?
Hello officer Jenny, my name is pokemon Ranger ____ and it seems that your on your own mission. Me and this trainer are tracking down a couple of bad guys who stole a young man's pokemon. I would as for your assistance but it seems that you have your hand full.
Yes, I am kind of busy right now, but im sure this trainer will help you until Iv'e solved this situation.She begins to talk to you:
Trainer, im going to go after Absol.I guess you ran in to a more important job to tend to, but no matter,I will find (TheNameOfLady'sHusband) if its the last thing I do.
She runs off after Absol.
Hmm maybe Officer Jenny's problem is similar to ours.Besides that, an Absol is a sign of a natural disaster.We better be careful.
You walk on west and then up north a bit,(it gets cloudy) and you will find what looks like a deserted old shed.When you approach it, the angry Absol comes from another direction and blocks the doorway. It enters the shed.:
We better go in after it, maybe its trying to tell us to follow it.(it starts to rain)Or maybe it was trying to tell us to get inside before we get wet.
You and the ranger go inside.As soon as you enter, you see the president of Pokeball Co. in the top right corner standing next to a pocher,and 5 grunts each standing next to 5 stools with 1 Telepathy Ball on each in the middle of the room.(You come in from the south west entrance of this place, and to get to the poacher, you have to battle all 5 of the grunts/poachers who are blocking the way.)There is also some cages in the south east inside the room. The poacher says:
What is this Absol doing in here?And whats this, a ranger and trainer are in here too?
Whatever your plan is poacher, we are here to stop it.Return the pokemon to the wild and give back the pokemon you stole from the young boy.
Be patient ranger and let me introduce my self. My name is Pokemon Hunter E and thanks to my leaders ingenious plan and this man's telepathy balls, we will be able to make pokemon talk. Then, we will sell them for a large amount of money to out clients. As for this other pokemon that got caught in out nets, you can have it if you can defeat me. If you defeat me, i'll give you the key to unlock it from it's cage. A Pichu appears in one of the cages on the other side of the room. Then Absol starts roaring in anger and tries to get to the other side of the grunts. It moves from one grunt to another unable to cross.
Come down old friend, i'll be alright.
Trainer, I need you to defeat the grunts and get the five Telepathy balls containing wild pokemon. While you do that, i'll attempt to come Absol down and gain it's trust with my capture styler. I'm counting on you trainer, don't fail this mission.
   Him and Absol goto a top left area where he attempts to gain it's trust with the capture styler, while you fight the five grunts that are blocking the way. They will be standing vertically and in front of each one of them will be a telepathy ball on a stool. It doesn't matter what order you defeat them, but after you defeat all five, than that last one you battle will move out of the way.

   The first grunt starting from the bottom has a Treecko and Vigoroth. When you approach him, he will be talking to a telepathy ball and say:
 Come on remember how to say everything that I teach you when your released.Then, you walk up to the telepathy ball and release the Yanma inside. It flies out of the room and you put the Telepathy ball in your backpack.
The second grunt has a Smoochum and Pilowswine. When you approach him, he talks to the telepathy ball and says:
Repeat after me, "I live in the forest. I'm a grass type."
After you defeat him, walk up to the ball and release the Bellsprout inside. It walks out and you get the Telepathy ball.
The third grunt has a Marshtomp and Ledyba. When you approach him, he is talking to telepathy ball and saying:
 If you speak outside of this ball, i'll give you some pokemon food.
After you defeat him, release a Forretress from the telepathy ball. It walks out and you put the ball in you bag.
The fourth grunt has an Elecktrike and a Murkrow. When you approach him he is talking to the telepathy ball and saying:
Repeat after me, " A,B,C,D..."
After he is defeated, release the Bayleef inside. It runs out of the room and you take the telepathy ball.


                        ~~Everything Under This has NOT Been Edited.~~

The president yells in anger:
No, don't use it on my dear friend.I should have known better than creating a pokeball that could manipulate pokemon like this.I should have never thought that something like this could help people.
The poacher puts the Xball on the transmitter,points it at Absol and it transmits a pokeball looking beam.He instructs Absol and it turns to you and the ranger:
Now Absol defeat the ranger and this trainer.
The ranger tells you what to do:
I'll use my capture styler to calm down and gain trust from the Absol,while you defeat the two grunts.
It will be a 2v2 battle witch means you get to use two pokemon.They have a Manectric and Honchkrow.
The absol still isn't responding to my friendship defeat the poacher until I can come it down.
Approach the poacher and he will say :
So after you defeated my other fellow poachers you think you can defeat me?Lets see how tough you really are.
He has an Espion,Gardevoir, and Luxray. After you defeat him:
How could you have defeated me?I was sure I could handle a young trainer like you.No matter, I will still use this transmitter to take over all this area's pokemon for my leader. The ranger gains control of Absol and Jenny enters and says:
Stop right there poacher.(she takes the Xball off of the transmitter) Your plan was foiled thanks to this trainer and ranger.She hands the president his Xball and he uses it to release the Elektrikes from it's control.They run off in to the forest.
Trainer, if that boy from town hadn't told me where he saw these poachers, then I wouldn't have found you.You should have waited for me to catch up with you. She takes the grunts and poacher out and then you end up back at the president's(woman's house) house.
The ranger is there along with you, the women,the president, and Absol.
You have returned my husband and Absol to their home.Thank you.
They begin to hug.
As for me young trainer, my work here is done.Officer Jenny has put the poachers behind bars and hopefully they will be scared to come back here.I also have told the other rangers of your help and what you have done here today.As a reward, Iv'e decided to give you this ________.

I havn't finished but this is what I have so far.(also. Iv'e been kind of busy this week so I won't finish this quest as fast as possible.)If anyone has an idea for a reward for this quest, please post.And also if anyone has an idea of a better way to connect Absol to the story, please post that also.

[Jerry]

Lol, it's like an edited version on Pokemon Ranger Shadows of Almia

Anyway, I might be biased, but I liked the game, and this quest as well

There are some spelling mistakes which make it... quite funny, but otherwise, it's only the XBall that I'm unsure of.

"that could cause the owner to control any type of pokemon without catching it"

What do you exactly mean here? Is it like the device the bad guys used in Pokemon Ranger, meaning, you only need it close to the pokemon, or you actually throw the XBall? The pokeball company suggests throwing, and one who doesn't know pokemon ranger won't think about just holding the XBall nearby, or use a machine to 'throw?' and capture all pokemon. See what I mean here?

[Wire]

Sometimes less is more.

[Safur]

The ranger quests are quite cool, thanks for making them.

[shadowbt]

Well as i said i wasn't finished, so i know there is alot of mistakes.But i was making it late at night and i got a little tired(alot tired) and i didn't feel like editing it or finishing it that night.Also i have never played Pokemon Ranger Shadows of Almia.Could you tell me what its about, because if it sounds something close to this quest, I might as well abandon it because someone might think that I copied it.And I don't plagiarize.

Edit: Well,Jerry i read this after you told me that this quest might be similar to pokemon ranger shadows of almia:http://www.gamefaqs.com/ds/944533-pokemon-ranger-shadows-of-almia/faqs/56103
 Its a guide/walkthrough to Pokemon shadows of almia.I found the part about these people or team called DimSun and they use some kind of machines to control pokemon. Luckily the only similarity is that they are trying to control pokemon for whatever reason.And in what i created, its just one new type of pokeball(xball) that was created to control pokemon for good by a pokeball maker and it was taken in to evil hands.
Now Jerry here is how i planned it to work.The pokeball maker would create the Xball that when its thrown will make that red beam at the pokemon that its thrown at.You know how when you catch a new pokemon in the anime, when it goes inside the ball it turns in to a red energy then goes inside the ball?or when you want to make a pokemon return, a red beam is between the pokemon and the ball and the pokemon goes inside.Now in the part where it is placed in the transmitter,it would transmit the beam over a nearby area and the pokemon would have been under the poachers control(thats why I said that they were inside some kind of observatory looking building, because in an observatory, the roof opens).As i said, its still a work in progress and i might have used to much imagination, but i guess thats why its not finished yet.(I'm open for suggestions.)

[PkMn Trainer Black]

75,000 poke yen for the reward.

[Desbear]

 a Absol egg as the reward could be good

EDIT: i knew i messed something up.

[Jerry]

A... sol egg!?

Anyway, no shadow, you never use too much imagination, if you can describe what you're thinking well enough, it's worth the try and that's the way that creative and original quests come

Okay, I, on my side can 'picture' it more clearly now, thank you for the explanation

Yes, they used a tower to amplify the power of some black gem that they found to control pokemon through its radiations. But let's not get into too much detail there.

[Safur]

A... sol egg!?

I think he meant Absol.

Who cares it looks like shadows of Almia, it doesn't mean it's bad.

[Jerry]

That might be it... but he calls himself "sol" in RPs, so that might be something completely different.

[Safur]

That might be it... but he calls himself "sol" in RPs, so that might be something completely different.

I don't think he wants an egg of its RP-character, but it sounds fun anyway .

[Jerry]

Of course, not, but something he wanted to say but said it without much explaining what it is...

[shadowbt]

Well just so that this quest isn't accused of being similar to that pokemon ranger game, i'm going to change what the pokeball does that the pokeball maker creates.So, instead of it being able to control more than one pokemon, it will do something else.So, of course im going to have to change the storyline a bit.Also like iv'e said before, i've been kind of busy this week and won't be able to edit it soon.(Since this is not a completed quest,im just posting it on here so that you guys can see my progress, so don't criticize to much.)I'm gonna try to think of a reward from the ranger and one from the lady and her husband.
[spoiler]What the pokeball is going to do, has something to do with how in the recent pokemon movies, the legendary pokemon talk to Ash and friends using telepathy.[/spoiler]

[Desbear]

That might be it... but he calls himself "sol" in RPs, so that might be something completely different.

I don't think he wants an egg of its RP-character, but it sounds fun anyway .

i accidentally left off the "ab" paert in "absol"sorry guys
 

[shadowbt]

Ya meowth, some people were wondering about that.lol